"Hello", she says."I live on a plateau too."
And so she dares this lonely man to woo
A tall, intelligant blonde from some dream
Intimidating Woman-woman it would seem
Dare she does and accepts these bold words to persue
Into a foolish world as only words can do
Poetry and paintings lure this siren closer still
As spirits unite as only spirits will
Yet she feels as though love is a lost art
Mere words cannot woo this woman's heart
Alas words and oils are all she has to give
In her imagined hope that real love will live
Still spirits and hearts will blindly go
Forth...to far away playgrounds, even though
Wisdom senses the dangers lurking there
Truth is rarely found in the consequence of a dare
The die is cast and destiny awaits
This meeting...a possible folly of fate
All too quickly eyes seek out the comforting sight
Thus causing two souls to couple...unite
Timid smiles and a shy embrace
Bringing two eager hearts face to face
As a green turtle and a dolphin swim into the blue
Of her eyes as gifts of words are exchanged by two
Fill a room with soft music and sighs that might
Chase the clouds of doubt away from this fearless night
Where once only spirits chanced to meet
Now senses touch with their kisses sweet
From two lives full of joy and pain
Two hearts touch and meet again
In this vast plateau new love finds a way
To preserve this memory for another day.
I feel like I just watched a romantic movie with a great story! Your love prose is always special sis, and beautifully painted.
Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on September 14, 2006
Susan, this is brilliant and glorious.Everytime I come here I get manna so brilliant..There is a muse in you that is so powerfuly gracious and diffrent all the time with talent flowing.. I just got through reading some of the famous poet Maya Angelou's works from her inagraul speech for Clinton and excerps from "I know why the caged bird sings"..GLORIOUS!!!!..If you get a chance read some of her works on the net..
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Love & Peace
William
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Love tinka
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Dozen't get any better than this..
What unadulterated bliss and recognition in your choice words..
Blessings
Peter
To preserve this memory for another day.
Quite a Deep poem, Susan, and your title is most appropriate.
Love Pierre.
Love,
Taylor
Regis
lovely romantic poem ... i enjoyed reading ...
Love,
Eileen
Eternal Love, Dove
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)