In the light of evening shade
A ray of silver gently plays
Upon a bead of moisture caught
While passion springs secure and taut
From the shadows a mistress maid
Comes to lick each silver bead
Takes his lips in raw delight
To draw his moans into the night.
I second Peter's "WoW" and add a W O WWWWWWWW!! of my own. If this doesn't reach out and grab ya, nothing will. Excellent passionate poetry, Susan, well done!
Yowser..
this is so sensually pleasing I can almost taste the salty beads of perspiration that flow when two join as one in the night. Captured my attention Susan, beautiful write for sure.
Hugs
Fee
Ron
Love,
Taylor
Love Tinka
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Peter
I so want some!
Yummmmmmmmmmmm
Neat Sweet
-Bill
this is so sensually pleasing I can almost taste the salty beads of perspiration that flow when two join as one in the night. Captured my attention Susan, beautiful write for sure.
Hugs
Fee
Eileen
Love,
Dove