This is one of two poems I wrote of Rodin's, "The Kiss".
Susan*
This morning sun is squinting in...to glisten where our love has been
Embroiled in play that touched the nerves and bleached the walls with shadows curve
The dance of love that tore the silence and whispered screams of lust and balance
For in the night with passions calling came the answer of provocative lolling
When lust won out over common sense and juices seethed until they bent
From tweaks that spoke to nerves on fire and called upon loves true desires
And two who took from suckled love and stuck to sheets while just above
The bed of shadows rocked to sleep provoked the night with passions deep
And lulled these two to doze with hums that pushed and tugged until did come
The final dew from love so deep that pooled and stuck them to the sheets
The throws of love that never lacked...stuck back to front and front to back
In love's embrace till dawn awoke their love again that gently spoke
Again to toss and moan with sighs and promises ever...with no good-byes.
To seal this love for time to keep and love again then fall asleep.
Rich in images and passionate beyond words this one had me breathing heavy by the end of the fourth line. You captured your topic oh so well and left me daydreaming of the possibilities. Well done sweet friend.
Where in the world do you come up with these provocative tidbits? Such a passionate soul and heart you have been given and, to this writer, it seems as if you have turned it up several notches in the last few months.
You must have to replace PC keyboards quite often, being that those fingers generate so much heat when you compose, you probably melt them.
Gripping indeed ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2006
Aw, just when I think that you have peaked, here you come with something like "Lust and Balance." You are truly a never-ending source of amor and . . . er . . . lust. Yep. Front and center.
Oh, Oh, Ohhhhh...
to have this, ah sigh~
so sensual so beautifully humanly loving and sexual love expressed in a way that is so ever so beautifully written one can feel the passion and the peace, that 'Lust and Balance'...
wonderfully achingly special, not surprising from you, dear Susan, you've so much class and so much humaness and spirit...
xxoo,
michele
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(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Tracking you now. :)
Well done!!
love Tinka
If only..... Pierre.
An enjoyable write
Love & Peace
William
Great poetry!
ET
A pleasure to read.
Elizabeth
Fee
Where in the world do you come up with these provocative tidbits? Such a passionate soul and heart you have been given and, to this writer, it seems as if you have turned it up several notches in the last few months.
You must have to replace PC keyboards quite often, being that those fingers generate so much heat when you compose, you probably melt them.
Gripping indeed ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
to have this, ah sigh~
so sensual so beautifully humanly loving and sexual love expressed in a way that is so ever so beautifully written one can feel the passion and the peace, that 'Lust and Balance'...
wonderfully achingly special, not surprising from you, dear Susan, you've so much class and so much humaness and spirit...
xxoo,
michele
This write is as hot as that desert scene...
Peter
Thank you angel....
Love,
Dove