Beyond the door that once was closed
Then with his dew upon this rose
Comes like fairies in the night
His form is eased into my sight
His body ladened upon repose
Gentley nestled within his rose
Opened up as reds turn light
When cardinals flutter in this night
The songs emerge to touch the air
As he taste the petals there
Then passion speaks as lips croon
Slowly wakening...the night blooms.
"the night blooms" is a beautiful expression. Also, "Beyond the door that once was closed" enticing
Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on January 24, 2007
I love the dreamy sensation of this Susan. I love the sounds of the night birds as the sun dips below the horizon, when "The songs emerge to touch the air."
~Butch
As sensual as a unexpected cool summer breeze on hot naked skin, this one leaves the reader free to fly into your dreamscape and participate in the magic happening there. Susan this is a stunning piece and I love it.
Fee
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Now that is a most beautiful poem describing nature's glory. Great. Victor
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Gale Sinclair is a marriage counselor who has broken the cardinal rule of psychotherapy and fallen in love with his client, Zoelle Sutherland.
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Ron
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Fee
Potent, rich analogies! Wonderfully expressed, with a glorious photo! :-D
Love you,
simonb
In Agape Love, Jo