Shades of a rainbow in colors you pick
Smiles all in cardinal for kisses that stick
Cheeks all a blush in rosey nosegays
Eyes of azure that sparkle and play
Alive is a word that dresses in love
Cobalts of blue delight skies above
Colors ablaze as in spring all year through
Love a kaliedescope in me and in you
Yellow the golden that peeks from beneath
Carnellion blossoms as hearts keep the beat
The footsteps kick stars up from the heels
Walking is proud and the whole spirit feels
Its sensing and loving, devotion a'stirring
Holding caresses with kissing occurring
Its tongue tied and gossebumps
With hearts whispered...purring
Its birds out of nowhere with flutters a'wing
Its winter with cold all warmed into spring
Its smile going miles with fancies a'bustling
In colors of love and passion a'rustling
Its rainbows unended with arches of color
Then treasures in hearts and kisses that smother
The hugs and the fingers all woven in two
The colors of romance in me just for you.
Susan, this is a magnificent romantic writing, the images are unbelievable and each line is written to such a great rhyme & rhythm. I would say this is one of your best ever and I enjoyed ever line in it. A keeper!!!
Sweet and imaginative with the picture of what love and a loving relationship is supposed to be like. Enjoyed this one Susan and loved the easy flow.
Hugs
Fee
The cadence of your poetry is as always immaculate, as if reflecting the rhythm of life. The good side of life, on which life depends. The image your words paint are as colorful as the shades of a rainbow, the same yet different each time the impression of one caresses our eyes. Love is the most powerful emotion in the universes to which we willingly surrender; a rare and sacred thing. Thank you for creating and sharing this most eloquent poem,
You, are the ultimate descriptive writer of passion! My favorite line is "love a kaleidoscope in me and you" but I love the whole poem and everything about it.
The Matchmaker:
Angela Calminetti, mother of five, New Age practitioner and gifted psychic and telepath, is proud of her family ties and does everything she can to make sure that all of her younger siblings are as happy in love and marriage
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a very expressive poem...
enjoyed...Art Sun...
Allen
- Bill
well done Susan...
John
Ron
Hugs
Fee
complimented with the brilliance
Of your unique imagery
love & peace
William
Chris
Walter
Love, Pierre
Axilea
Stay southern and keep writing.
Ed
God bless you. Kathy
LOVE,
et
Beautiful hues of love, delicately shaded promise of romance to come--well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.