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Vows, Thoughts and a Two-minute Poem
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
  
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Quietly he took my heart then opened an empty shell
He settled in mysteriously to fan the flames that dwell
He eases my frustrations and soothes my wrinkled brow
My bouyancy is timeless and he did this too, somehow
The smooth and easy way with him is dedicated vigilance
His last kiss burns as though t'was now...a wonderful experience
He smiles forever in my heart and warms the slightest chill
His whispers dance all over me..he's here inside me still
Then still I wait for his return, this master of my Soul
This Lord of critical knowledge of whom my rhythm tolls
The lull of magic fingers can ease away all stress
I think, perhaps, its a different love...so intimately blessed
Noncommittal and then not... although the love is pure
It's a timeless gem and rare, indeed, of this I am assured
Each time he whispers to my heart and bids for me to rise
I open once again to him and stalk his loving eyes
To be so treasured with the time and elegance of trust
For vows once made and still adhered...between the two of us.

Copyright ©2003 Susan K. Rowse
















Most of my better poetry comes from within in just a few minutes, mostly my mind is a blank and my fingers fly and I don't comprehend a thing til it is finished. Then I sometimes overwhelm myself. It must be the Muse or the Phantom of my thoughts...who really ever knows anyway?

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 Reviews of "Vows, Thoughts and a Two-minute Poem"
Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed on January 18, 2003
ghost writing...but you do it so well.

Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2003
"His whispers dance all over me" Wonderfull.. Romance is sowell worth the taste.. Super write..

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2003
Susan, your muse was working well today. An emotional well to drink from for me. Bill

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on January 17, 2003
great write as usual Susan...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2003
Susan ,
You have excellent two minute muse timing for this one is excellent.
Master of my soul"
I love your poetry.
Peggy

Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2003
Romantic indeed i like the line the kiss burning or some such. Reminds me a little bit of the romantics of the 19th century

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2003
Very romantic and beautiful!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 16, 2003
Your muse has blessed you;-) this write is entrancing. I know how you feel I do the same sometimes in a matter of moments and know it has to come from the spirit, it isn't me;-)


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