Dressing for love is a time when all the emotions run with colors.
Passion'S Dictate
Susan K. Rowse
copyright 2003
I'm dressed in passion's etiquette
Say thank you for your smile
I wear your glow upon my stance
In statuesque Amazon style
I walk with synchronized precision
Within the soul of two in one
I dream illusions promise faithful
In love with old but new outcome
My smile is coaxed from deeper fathoms
There where treasures live secure
I ooze the love through nerves redeeming
Where love cooks up in blues of azure
Through sunsets shine I glow all phosphorous
To glide through passions garden gate
To walk in style with love abundant
In all that your love's fashion dictates.
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Reviewed on March 6, 2003
You're words come from your deep soul that's why they resound so honest and heartfelt. Immortality, ah, that is your name.
Susan this is excellent and full of passion, love the art too...
Reviewed by Malachy MacFarlane (Reader)
Reviewed on March 5, 2003
Wonderful, lovely! One suggestion, and just my opinion, in the 4th line I would take out either "graceful" or "statuesque" just seems the wordiness of that line breaks up the excellent rhythm that is so prevalent in the rest of the piece (just my O.S.H.O.) A wonderful write! Mal.
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