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If You Loved Me
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
  
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Augh.... but can a heart beat so hollow when memories fill it still?


If you Love Me

If you loved me you would feel different
Than anything you've felt before
If you cared as you say then you'd be here
Instead my feet paces the floor
If your true heart is filling with my love
It'd overflow basins with smiles
It'd shine so bright in the darkness
Ships would see it for miles
If you really love me then show me
Come slowly into my arms
Wrap yourself all up in my heaven
Mingle your love with these charms
Merge my lips into your lips
Taste my sweet filling breath
Open your mouth to my pulse
Feel heat from under this dress
Suckle this love with your passion
Lets not wait anymore to begin
Beginning stated in faces
Lost mysteries of miles is a sin
Lets paint the visuals of this love
Smile into smile...into smile
Forgetting geographic distance
Together less miles upon miles
If you love me don't borrow my passions
Give into it...just let it flow
If love is winning this distance
Then loving is letting it go
Our romance knows no barriers
Its been this way since the kings
Rode quite a distance for their love
A blare from their trumpets would ring
The prelude to passions adventure
With hearts that wrapped up their thrones
History's made of these Camelot's
When Knights and Romeos were born
The way of the heart has a timeline
The history stays with these souls
If you love me ride with my passions
Let miles disappear and lets hold
These hearts that beat as one now
Regardless of how far away
Your love is closer than ever
If you love me then love me today

© 2003 Susan K. Rowse

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 Reviews of "If You Loved Me"
Reviewed by The Gentle Man
Reviewed on May 25, 2003
very powerful and persuasive.....eloquently written!

Reviewed on May 23, 2003
Susan you write good stuff, you cream puff. GEM

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
A spectacular poem

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
I love it. :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
Brilliant! Your passiion overfloweth!

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
Dear Susan, Lovely write! I am betting he truly does love you!


yf
tony

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
Peg beat me in quoting my favorite lines in this wonderful poem!! Excellently done...

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
Susan,
"These hearts that beat as one now
Regardless of how far away
Your love is closer than ever
If you love me then love me today "
This is so good

Peace Peg

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
Beautiful work, Susan. Full of longing and passion. Bravo.


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