Still Waters (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick

Reviewed on February 13, 2004

lovely

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on February 3, 2004

Your writing only gets more beautiful and profound

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 31, 2004

Moving and beautiful verses, Susan. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Marco Landi (Reader)

Reviewed on January 31, 2004

from a wonderful romantic heart this is you at your best

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on January 29, 2004

a beautifully written poem

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on January 27, 2004

A beautiful rendering of words of love.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on January 27, 2004

Gorgeous write Susan...Missed you....lovely lines here..wonderful flow of the poetry...floria

Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader)

Reviewed on January 27, 2004

Beautiful expression of love.
Great writing.
Andrea

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)

Reviewed on January 27, 2004

a beautiful flow to this piece Susan. To be loved and being in love is the most wonderful feeling and it shone from your words.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 27, 2004

Very beautiful poetry Susan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Justareader Offinework (Reader)

Reviewed on January 27, 2004

I loved this eloquent romantic piece from the first word to the last! A lovely read.

Peace
Tony

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on January 27, 2004

Feathered brush strokes along an ebb
Two pulses holding hands

..exceptional lines..great work ty Susan!

vesna *smile*

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on January 27, 2004

Excellent write as always Susan...glad to see ya posting again.
Allen

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 26, 2004

very well written though i would refrain from using a cliche as the last line ...

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on January 26, 2004

Susan, this is wonderful...

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 26, 2004

EXCELLENT WRITE ...SUSAN
ENJOYED MUCH

WILLIAM

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on January 26, 2004

Heaven deep in thought
Holding on to a memory
In a fisted clutch and caught
Sucking up the essence
From every breath you took
Lapping like a gentle tide
A page turns in the book
Feathered brush strokes along an ebb
Two pulses holding hands
Passions paint in bolder strokes

Dear Susan....You have penned a romantic gem....Its so good to hear from you...I am so happy....My side of the world is alrighty...Hows your side of the world...Dont feel forlorn and alone...I am forever with you....We are friend forever...cheers...love n luck.....BHUWAN

Reviewed by L M (Reader)

Reviewed on January 26, 2004

This is so romantic well done!