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The Girl In My Dreams
by Richard Lee King → (All Poetry by Richard Lee King)
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A few years back, before I met my sweetie, I was a lonely old fart. I’d often spend my evenings writing little rhymes. This is the result of one of those long, lonely, late evening escapades spent dreaming and writing of that special someone.

*THE GIRL IN MY DREAMS* I’m now in my sixties and still, we’re apart. If we’re to ever be together, we’ll soon need to start. When I get into my seventies, I might be too old to dance, but I hope we’ll still be able to share in a little romance. Then I’ll be in my eighty’s, probably still longing for you, but when we finally find each other I’ll be too old to screw. If I make it to ninety and I’m still able to walk, we might have to have verbal sex, if I’m still able to talk. I could be sixty or ninety, or even a hundred don’t you see, there’ll never be a time when you won’t belong with me. But, when they call my number and my time is nearly over, my last thoughts will be of you and our roll in the clover. You’ll know that I loved you, I’ll know you loved me. And, we’ll always be together, wherever we might be. No matter what the outcome, still, it will always come out, you’ll always be the one I was dreaming about. © 2011 Richard Lee King. All Rights Reserved. Author of: A Pursuit of Life & The Price of Freedom

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron

Reviewed on May 10, 2011

Unfortunate that the one we dream about isn't the one available and too often lot in the mists of time. I have an uidea where you are coming fron.

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Roll me over
In the clover,
Roll me over
In the clover
And do it again

Sorry, that old song just popped into my head. Patrick

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 9, 2011

Nicely done and I don't believe age ever is a reason not to share love and romance, the physical aspect may slow down but a soft caress, a warm hug and a tender kiss are always doable.
fee

Reviewed by Donna Chandler

Beautifully written. You were born with a poetic heart.

Donna

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

I'm so glad you found each other while you are still spring chickens.

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Enjoyed the wonderful lyrical lilt of this one, Richard!Glad you finally found her.....

Anna

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on May 8, 2011

Your love must have contained some marvelous energy which gathered her to you! Inspiring :)
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

I hope we are not dreaming of the same lady.:)
Peace
Tony

Reviewed by Paul Berube