First of a group featured in the Kookamonga Square poetry group (See link) and Makata Unpoemed, to be published in Jan 04 Autumn Leaves
J-03
Transfixed for a moment
in the crystalline music,
your picture touches,
entertaining
my mind with
deft
subtle
brushstrokes of dawn's waking harmony
The rose mimics the myriad
of sunlight slicing across horizons
as it dries and, fading
above your golden visage,
finds itself always
paled in contest
to your grand/
fine
glory
of an immaculate becoming
Your beauty proves true the
quality of quantity
yet I must wonder
if love fades so
as a rose
cut
away
from floral bouquets, it's warm birthplace
I shall expire so gorgeously
separate from your fiery hunger,
your soft eye's wonder of
flames, hurricanes, awkward thorns,
and dandelions
adrift in seas
distant from
me
I'll keep my blush in this fond remembrance
This has a polished, stately feel yet it speaks of memories and emotions. J.
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on July 31, 2003
You certainly have a style of your own..but then again who's could you have but your own..hmmm..'To thine own self be true'...well done Tyler! There's always something left in the air in your works and that is what intrigues me..the element of mystery.
{{HUGS}}
Vesna
Reviewed by Griffin
Reviewed on July 31, 2003
Beautiful -
wonderful line -
"I shall expire so gorgeously "
... great images, wonderful tracing without being too linear or literal.
Nobleman's son, Todd Ramble, returns home after years abroad and finds himself falling in love with his step-sister, who was now a grown woman. Unfortunately their love is brutally challenged by his tyrannical father.
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{{HUGS}}
Vesna
wonderful line -
"I shall expire so gorgeously "
... great images, wonderful tracing without being too linear or literal.
thank you,
Griffin
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This is so beautiful! :)
In Spirit,
Bear
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)