The cosmos burns, gleaming
upon streamline ripples in the sea
and recognizes your moony face,
your illuminated eye, and lips red
as a star burned out from too much life
You survive
You survive the troubles of everyday dreams
and grow as inspiration every night
in the spirits of those who know you
in the little ways of our modern age
made associable in sight
Thanks for being a prominent beauty,
a heart of certain valors,
and a gentle breath
upon the land
I dig your skin, baby
and think it could have a purpose
to sow the seed of a universe
The process of attraction, so wonderous, but also fearful. You portray the emotion well. lgl
Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Reviewed on October 4, 2003
SHIT, you're good!
No, I take that back, Tyler!
You're a genius!
I just LOVE your poetry.
You have style, you have zest, you have PER-SON-A-LI-TY!
In a nutshell, you ARE indubitably one of the GREATEST poets on AD.
And I MEAN it!
I rarely effuse to such a fever pitch about ANY poet!
Please send me up to 20 of your poems (no longer than 30 lines each) for DEFINITE publication in the Fall, 2004 issue of Poetry in Emotion, our serialized Canadian E-Zine, which has an ISSN (International Standard Serial Number) and is catalogued with the National Library of Canada.
We'll discuss your bio later.
Please send your poetry to:
vallance22.gosympatico.ca
NOTE! Other authors and poets oh Authors Den, please do NOT send me unsollicited manuscripts. I simply have neither the time nor the energy to read them.
Also, Tyler, please send me the LINK to your poetry home page, and I shall be only too delighted to add you to the LINKS page of my poetry home page, POESIE'S LAISSEZ-FAIRE FAIRE FOIRE
Once again, mes fe/lications les plus since\res, mon cher ami!
LOL..finally something really good and quirky. I am happy I got to read this before it fell over the screen into AD oblivion. I love poetry that is new and creative. Thanks....
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No, I take that back, Tyler!
You're a genius!
I just LOVE your poetry.
You have style, you have zest, you have PER-SON-A-LI-TY!
In a nutshell, you ARE indubitably one of the GREATEST poets on AD.
And I MEAN it!
I rarely effuse to such a fever pitch about ANY poet!
Please send me up to 20 of your poems (no longer than 30 lines each) for DEFINITE publication in the Fall, 2004 issue of Poetry in Emotion, our serialized Canadian E-Zine, which has an ISSN (International Standard Serial Number) and is catalogued with the National Library of Canada.
We'll discuss your bio later.
Please send your poetry to:
vallance22.gosympatico.ca
NOTE! Other authors and poets oh Authors Den, please do NOT send me unsollicited manuscripts. I simply have neither the time nor the energy to read them.
Also, Tyler, please send me the LINK to your poetry home page, and I shall be only too delighted to add you to the LINKS page of my poetry home page, POESIE'S LAISSEZ-FAIRE FAIRE FOIRE
Once again, mes fe/lications les plus since\res, mon cher ami!
Richard Vallance,
Ottawa, Ontario,
CANADA