Written after reading a poem, actually quite bad (perhaps it was the translation,) by the old world poet Lacelles Abercrombie.
Published in "Flying Mermaid" Newsletter.
We are yours, dear love, sum and composition
as if you were the profound thought
and we, the utterances of such thoughts-
the very inferno of your musing
Yet, neither razed nor charred through your imagining,
we are weathered without weakening to the tempest
of your song, with it’s subtlest undertone and meaning,
for in your name of shameless indulgence we become
We pay heed, in memory of the fool, and king
left to rule thrones of filth, cradles of waste
by your fickle distaste and whimsy waking
only for the instant it takes to wane
For you, dear love, wear your power like a cloak
of sunlight and moon, offering shimmers of brilliance
alongside the windswept flippancy of darkened hope
concealed unto itself by the fragile veil of indifference
You make a hazard of the stars, and home built on winds,
echoing in both the liturgy of exultation, vernacular of sorrow,
and ultimately the most profound which is unspoken
between those hollow walls, ourselves, the beloved, and you
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Reviews of "An ode to love"
Reviewed by Trinity Griffin (Reader)
Reviewed on November 8, 2003
I loved how you wrote from your soul. It was sweet and intoxicating .Great Job-
well written imagery though i would filter more emotion and energy into its movement...
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on October 8, 2003
Every line was worth reading...and reading again. This is poetry! I love the places this took my mind. Excellent work! Sometimes, someone told me, muses can be fickle ;) It made a great piece poetry.
Sylvia Masters, a hot fifty-two year old widow and CEO of her husbands company is challenged by her own instincts, family and friends when the Lieutenant investigating the murder of her ex-fiancee ask her to dinner. After a tumultuous beginning, the
Thanks,
Emilie