Be it that I have a thousand and one lives,
each shall be spent in the pursuit
of you, my daring to dream, my darling of constructive humanity
.
I've walked a thousand and one miles in simple shoes,
and the clay feet of times travail
now dare to tread where angels scorn and fear
.
This life may be spent on a sojourn soul,
bygone when lost upon desire's precipices
and made perpetually less whole
with every moment, each experience
which distances my immortal spirit
from the exquisite nobility of your condition in purity
.
I may be unworthy this go around
to savor your cleverness and cloy,
but it cannot be said for each incarnation
Beloved, hope springs eternal
of the infinite possibility inherent in our existential cycle
I'll find you again in the next world
rest assured
It almost seems as though you were talking THROUGH the Divine Mind: Buddha, Jesus, Bahallu'lah.
Truly haunting and very very loving and profound!
Folks, when you see great poetry, recognize it.
THE POET MUST TRANSCEND THE BOUNDS OF TIME
(See also on my own AD, Percy Bysshe Shelley's DEFENCE OF POETRY, 1821... he's got more to say on that account!)
Richard Vallance
Send this poem to me for consideration for publication in Poetry in Emotion. I am going to have to devote AN ENTIRE issue of the Journal to you alone, as it now appears.
Very enjoyable read, Tyler! Sadness, willpower and hope many emotions portrayed in a wonderful poem...~Z~
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
Excellance Tyler with this one. I love the melancholy tone, kind of could see you smiling and chuckling to yourself with a note of wryness sprinkled in as you wrote this one!
~Nikki~
P.S. If I am not making sense excuse...I need to get that 5am java in me pronto! ;O) lol
Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
This is a terrific statement of true love and
Soulmates, very nice Tyler!
Love the sad reverie and the willingness of the poet to wait for another lifetime if needed. Tyler your work is brilliant.
JC xoxoxoxo
Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
Breathtaking work Taylor..Masterful I should say..You have an amazing depth in your writes, and emotions tend to make logic of a poem haywire, but you are very disciplined..
Thanks,
Justin
Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
Most beautiful poem. An excellent and profound melancholy for a wise
soul.
It's those little falling notes of sadness, Tyler, in this poem, that make it so lovely somehow. These threads of elegant melancholy run through many of your poems, I will have to come back and read more. If you can write like this now, while you are young, then the future for you will be brilliant...
Exquisite poem, flowing in an atmosphere reminding me that of a romance immortalized by the History of my country... a king's adieu to his forbidden love... "I shall meet thee beyond the end of the world".
~Alexandra~
Ah ha! Well, written, Tyler! I agree with Vesna, in that at least you were lucky enough to have found your love once before. I especially like your last line:
I'll find you again in the next world
rest assured
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2003
JEWEL is your Twin Flame!!!..Do not, dear friend cry over the seeming loss...she is you and you are she...there's no argumnet in that..be comforted in the knowledge that at least you have met and loved ...so many are still yearning and longing for that counterpart..give thanks for what you have..naturally writing about such bliss and pain assists the rest of us in many ways..so Tyler..thankyou for this wondrous write...:)
Dive into an enchanting adventure! This light-hearted romance will transport you to 17th-century Scotland, where a free-spirited 21st-century heroine brings love & laughter to a stressed-out laird's life - with a little help from the Fae!
A search for the ghost of a chorus girl chorine haunting a costume designer’s Manhattan apartment leads to an encounter with an eccentric, mischievous witch with the ability to send folks back through time…in this case, the 1919 Ziegfeld Follies.
Zara’s Bois:
When the powers-that-be make the decision to return a selfish party-girl to Earth on three missions of redemption, can romance and mayhem be far behind? One hot and trendy gay nightclub, two bickering angels and three unlikely p
Tyler!
Two words.
Transcendance, immanence.
It almost seems as though you were talking THROUGH the Divine Mind: Buddha, Jesus, Bahallu'lah.
Truly haunting and very very loving and profound!
Folks, when you see great poetry, recognize it.
THE POET MUST TRANSCEND THE BOUNDS OF TIME
(See also on my own AD, Percy Bysshe Shelley's DEFENCE OF POETRY, 1821... he's got more to say on that account!)
Richard Vallance
Send this poem to me for consideration for publication in Poetry in Emotion. I am going to have to devote AN ENTIRE issue of the Journal to you alone, as it now appears.
Kudos (as per usual)
Riccardo
P.S. check out my latest,
The Iliad, Book 1 Entire, in Sonnets: Proemium
Richard
~Nikki~
P.S. If I am not making sense excuse...I need to get that 5am java in me pronto! ;O) lol
Soulmates, very nice Tyler!
Exceptiional poetry!
JC xoxoxoxo
Thanks,
Justin
soul.
Greetings from Atlanta.
Goreja.com
Sara.
~Alexandra~
I'll find you again in the next world
rest assured
Vesna