Love Me True (poem) by Lonnie Hicks on AuthorsDen

Love Me True
by Lonnie Hicks → (All Poetry by Lonnie Hicks)
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She said' I want you sweeter than sugar darker than night and capable of making me take delight in what I shouldn't. He said: I want you lovely a she-devil at night and give me what you shouldn't; a cat with velvet claws. He said: I also want you chaste enjoy the chase and proclaim you have never been caught. She said: I want you strong and very tender a tiger and a kitten is that too much to ask and offer me too security. He said: Now you have my head spinning you are looking for superman let me don my cape in the telephone booth and get my self a spandex outfit. She said: Great, and you should also be a great lover. He said: You got criteria I'm not sure I fit. She said: Maybe not. And the two decided to not to mix love and business. So she settled for Mr. Right Now, Right Here and he settled for Single Nights each having made a stand for the future.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on June 15, 2014

holds reader interest

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on February 17, 2011

Very cute story, Lonnie! And it all worked out in the end...well penned, my friend!

Anna

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on February 16, 2011

Brilliant pen, so unique

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Wonderful writing indeed...Hugsss

Reviewed by Paul Judges

Excellent piece !

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on February 15, 2011

i join you on this. happens.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

I have to identify and laugh Lonnie, this is a charmer!
And yes, so many of us have been there certainly including me...completely lost and washed ashore by my stubborn ego.
Blessings,
Christine