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Knots
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A Love Story note: read this piece two ways-1-a double negative equals a positive or a successful love story or treat the double negative as a negative. The reader has to make up their own mind as to how she/he will read it.

She was my lady

not; 
 
She was my friend
not; 
 
I reached out to her, 
she reached out to me
not, not; 
 
she wasn't interested in me
not, not; 
 
My roommate and she
were seeing each other
not not, not, not
 
My stomach
knots.
 
Time to move on I said to my self

The room mate and she
broke up
not not; 

My heart all tied up in knots

spoke to her after a time
to see if she was interested in me
not, not,

And she was
not, not,

And we

are still
not not
without any knots.
 
 
 
 

 

   


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 Reviews of "Knots"
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on June 14, 2011
Knot meant to be. Patrick

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on June 14, 2011
Full of affectionate and adorable wit, but with just a hint of sadness!
Chris

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on June 14, 2011
Glad to see she didn't take away your sense of humor...this is soooo cute, Lonnie! giggle...

Anna


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