You push me and I fall
You pull me and I come
You touch me and I quiver
You turn from me and I shake
Your look grabs me
Your scent holds me
Your taste keeps me
Your touch hurts me
I am waiting for you
I am staring at you
I am yearning for you
I am nothing without you
I reach for your body
I plead with your heart
I beg you to stay
I watch as you leave
I stare at our pictures
You make new ones
I long for your voice
You never call
I yearn for your taste
You give it to another
I beg for you to return
You beg for me to flee
I go for your heart
You lay there and die
I want to die with you
You do not wait
I live to suffer forever
You torment me forever
We are together still
You push me and I fall
You pull me and I come
You touch me and I quiver
You turn from me and I shake
Your look grabs me
Your scent holds me
Your taste keeps me
Your touch hurts me
I am waiting for you
I am staring at you
I am yearning for you
I am nothing without you
I reach for your body
I plead with your heart
I beg you to stay
I watch as you leave
I stare at our pictures
You make new ones
I long for your voice
You never call
I yearn for your taste
You give it to another
I beg for you to return
You beg for me to flee
I go for your heart
You lay there and die
I want to die with you
You do not wait
I live to suffer forever
You torment me forever
We are together still
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Reviewed by J John (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2003
Intresting write .. havent seen emphasis created this way before J & J
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2003
Well done, Jeremy. Welcome to the den.
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Welcome to the Den Jeremy Huff,
This is excellent in emotions and feel to your verses...
"I go for your heart
You lay there and die
I want to die with you
You do not wait
I live to suffer forever
You torment me forever
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[Check your bio page when you get a chance. Your link doesn't work for some reason, and it looks to be a great link.]
Welcome to the den
family...
This is such a great
write...
Hope to see much more.
Trixie :)
This is excellent in emotions and feel to your verses...
"I go for your heart
You lay there and die
I want to die with you
You do not wait
I live to suffer forever
You torment me forever
We are together still"
Peggy