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wHoles In The Pocket
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We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde wHole In The Pocket The stitch was loose, the thread hung low The tension weak in patterned row That held 2 hearts, content and safe Secure and loved, in passions wake Then love fell thru, without a sound And rolled in circles, gutter bound A downward glance might just have shown The need to mend, loose pockets prone

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Reviews of "wHoles In The Pocket"

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 10, 2004

Excellent verses!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on May 10, 2004

Loved the simplicity of form and strength of meaning- excellent.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 10, 2004

Excellent Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ann Piatt

Reviewed on May 10, 2004

This is an excellent metaphor you have used in this piece. Sometimes the weak links (or loose threads) are right there in front of our eyes, yet we don't see them till stuff starts leaking out of our pockets. Very well said.

Ann

Reviewed by Elaine Carey

Reviewed on May 10, 2004

I love this witty metaphor.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on May 10, 2004

Brilliant quote, pic and poem to match, Anita! Such wisdom with so few lines that are quite perfectly stitched, sewn and interwoven - and such clarity of thought! I guess that walking around star-gazing and with head in the clouds leads to unreality for some and to a denial of the truth for others. Whereas keeping your hands in each other's pockets means that you at least THINK you have a feel for what is actually going on!!? Luvin it, thank you, Kate xx PS a propos my write today, sorry it's not too clear... ever heard of colour therapy?! Sure you have.. it's an American idea for sure! xx

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on May 10, 2004

Excellent piece and again Grind of the Mind ;)
Brava Lady A!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 10, 2004

I've noticed that about love. Fickle. Can't trust it. Loved the write.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 10, 2004

I've always liked that quote; and I really like this poem.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on May 10, 2004

I'm looking in the gutter for dosh, if I look up a bird gets me in the eye..

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