Softly Sighed (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Vincent Martin (Reader)

Reviewed on August 2, 2004

Mmmmmm, was my first reaction to this senual poem...nicely crafted, and the images it ivokes...~DarkBard~

Reviewed on June 28, 2004

A woman of many talents, what a sensual write Anita, keep swatting dem critters though.

Ch'erie :)

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)

Reviewed on June 28, 2004

mmmm, its that moment when the deed is done and the cozy cuddling begins......just holding each other, totally spent.....
oh course my breasts are round my knees now, so his head would be on my lap.....
beautiful write.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 26, 2004

Very inspiring.

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on June 26, 2004

Excellent soft romantic poetry, Anita!!! I enjoyed this soothing piece very much!!! Thank you for sharing it, Poet!!!

P.S. My beautiful friend Kelly, died of a drug overdose given to her by her so-called friends.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on June 26, 2004

Stormy?! Thought this much like being lulled into a post-coital sleep by that wonderful celestial hammock that seems to suspend from the balmy heavens and rock oh so sweetly at such times of bliss!! But, in answer the The Man's question, why for sure: Heavenly breasts surely beat with all the gamut of passion that is conceivable for mankind to shadow; that would be my guess, anyhow! Hmmm, this angel-cake write has taken all me energy and I'm sitting here in me gym kit feeling rather now disinclined to go and beat hell out of the rowing machine!! Mwah! (Psst...! What does T'aim i'ngra leat actually mean?! Soz to be so ignorant, but sounds nice...!!) Kate xx

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 25, 2004

i like the syntax of this romantic gem ...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 25, 2004

Something must have happened on fathers day, so much romance in the air...

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on June 25, 2004

Soft and romantic Anita.
I especially like the ending.

Blessings,
Joseph

Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 25, 2004

Softly this poem sighes of beauty.

Amy

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 25, 2004

Oh this is so very lovely.

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on June 25, 2004

ahhhh...what a lady of talent you are! When you are not writing about taking down fireflies with precisely flung boogers, you are writing beautiful, classic pieces of romantic verse! Well done, Lady A.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 25, 2004

(((lady a)))

o, yeah! captivating and delightful! :) sure made me sigh...wish I'D written this :) most beautiful work, poet!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 25, 2004

Enchanting and romantic, Lady A.

PS Was this written by the same poet who was doing that awful stuff to those fireflies?! Very talented writer, indeed!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 25, 2004

Beautiful sweet moment in time!!

Love Tinka