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CARNAL STORM
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Nothing is more beautiful than the love that has weathered the storms of life~J Jerome



CARNAL STORM


Cascades channel thru the turn
As the lava, brims to burn
Streams of heavens tame the spark
Freeing valley's from the dark

Lightening kisses....bolts of light
Heartbeat thunders roar the night
Shadows flare then merge as one
Mid the flash of dark and sun

Blinding suntides storm the air
Rain and hail......dance as pair
Winds of madness kidnap all
Thru the crevice.....caution falls

Tremors stoke and open wide
Rising...sinking.....in collide
Chaos rollicks......spicy rains
Wild natures........ unrestrained

Ravaged earth in pool by tide
Carnal storm to gentle bride
Ambushed prey by casuality
Cycled passions swirling free!

Pax
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 Reviews of "CARNAL STORM"
Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2004
woah, intense energy storms thru the whole piece...excellent, excellent write!

love&light,
**Mari**

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 26, 2004
i really like the energy of this passionately charged poem ... the images are fantastic!

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on September 25, 2004
very passionate! -- Jeff

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on September 25, 2004
Hmm. I don't know why, but I feel I should take a shower or something. LOL

Reviewed on September 25, 2004
(((lady a)))

WOWOWOWOWOW!! power in your pen, poet, POWER! this one thunders! LOVE LOVE LOVE it--BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) *continued prayers* and thanks for the update :)

Reviewed on September 25, 2004
A strong way with words Lady A. Loved every line

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 25, 2004
My kind of storm Lady A!;-)
Amazing flow of wondrous words!


Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2004
Love the flow of this one!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 25, 2004
Your verses blend nature with human passion exceedingly well. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2004
As a thunderous clap of thunder, so is a shriek in the night of ecstasy. Ya did good.

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2004
hmmm mt. st. helens wouldn't happen to be your muse?

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on September 25, 2004
Ah yes! I found this wonderfully exciting! Thanks!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 25, 2004
Now this I call "Sublime Poetry"

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2004
Anita, there are poems about storms... there are poems about making love... then there's you! You give rhyming a GOOD name, for all those who 'wouldn't be caught dead'... (grin) You don't just write, you weave. You don't just tell, you fascinate. To me, you are a voice that wraps words around the mind and invites audible sighs. I love your work. katy xox.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 25, 2004
I love the way you merge nature with passion , Lady...
An Art in itself...with beautiful aliteration and meter..
Peter

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2004
Very lovely Anita....your rhyme is to be applauded. Loved this beautiful poem.....ty, ty, Dani ;)


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