Vein the Edge (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on October 6, 2004

You are da bomb!

This is the poetry I love to read.......ty, Dani

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on October 6, 2004

wow outstanding the den's gallaxy is swooming with cosmic love I am loving it!!!
a melting experience here

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 6, 2004

Super write Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 5, 2004

Superb writing..
Thanks for your comment on me daughters poem
She is thrilled from the comments......

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on October 5, 2004

Well done Lady A, Well done

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on October 5, 2004

This is a tremendous write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 5, 2004

So exquisite! utterly beautiful Poem Anita!

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 5, 2004

very dreamy!

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on October 5, 2004

Anita,
You've certainly veined perfection here. You have the knack of making poetry a joy to read. You're definitely The Lady.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 5, 2004

(((lady a)))

mysterious, like emerging from a fog...soothing, like being enveloped by the mist...your words are delightful to reflect upon this day--BRAVA!

(((HUGS))), love and continued prayer, karla. :)

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on October 5, 2004

Hazy, gauzy - just damn beautiful, Anita! Within the veil, where we would all tread but where few have managed to actually pass through into this kind of reverential sanctuary and peace. It reminds me of the unspoken silence that exists just above the earth's atmosphere, an infinite stillness where words are just redundant - and even conscious thought! This speaks so powerfully of a mutual enjoyment of "just being" in togetherness. Awesome, thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on October 5, 2004

This is intelligent and beautiful. Enjoyed. Janet

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on October 5, 2004

Absolutely Beautiful Anita! My fav part...."And by a scorching, tender kiss
We light the night with glowing bliss" Beautiful

: )

Jack

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 5, 2004

Impressive poem, as is the graphic, Anita!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 5, 2004

It doesn't get any better than this, Oh My this is so lovely, Anita.