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The Party
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The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze.
~Gustavo Adolfo Becquer~



~*~THE PARTY~*~

He felt her presence in the air, before he saw her form
It made him slightly nervous... his neck grew hot and warm
His mouth was dry, his breath was quick, as he looked around the room
But only caught her silouette, along with some perfume

An auora rose of mystery, a craving for this shadow
To look into her very eyes.......to drink her in....so slow
Something felt familiar, and made his heart feel whole
This man a complex fraction, no peace within his soul

The party was so tight, with laughter, smoke and voice
But he was only focused upon his phantom choice
Looking for her eveywhere, he searched from room to room
Like a bloodhound on the scent.....of shadows and perfume

He found himself walking towards, a couple by the door
Muffled conversation, that sounded like a war
As he watched them silently, she stopped and turned his way
And felt his soul, speak through his eyes....he kissed her thru his
gaze

Anita
January 7, 2002

My inpiration for this poem came directly from this quote, I found it magnificant!




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 Reviews of "The Party"
Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on May 13, 2003
I've had many such moments - at parties, in the street, across restaurants and bars.
Its wonderful.

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2003
Winner of a write !!!!!

Reviewed on May 12, 2003
Whoa..this was so excellent, Loving your poetry here!

Reindeer

Reviewed on May 12, 2003
ohhhhh my...wonderful, wonderful Anita, loved it!!!! Standing ovation from me! :) Kerry

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2003
Ohhhhhhh damn! how utterly stunning Miz A! Your poetry is so lush and full.....ty, Dani

Reviewed by Shadow Writer (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2003
Yes that describes what I have felt many times. Well written.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2003
Beautiful...and I love that quote.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2003
Anita, I loved the first line and I loved the last line! The stuff in between was pretty good too. ~Joseph

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 12, 2003
You can feel the passion!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 12, 2003
Magnificent! where are you finding these quotes, you have them by the gazoo;-) they are all great, as is your poetry!

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on May 12, 2003
Anita,
This is great! You can feel the passion, and wanting between them! I LOVE that quote too!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2003
I agree it can happen this way. WOMAN!!! I love your mind! This is so unique. A line inspires me this way too! Teresa

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on May 12, 2003
Lady A, fantastic job with this poem. I've actually been in this situation.

Reviewed on May 12, 2003
love this, anita! :) (((HUGS))) outstanding write!

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on May 12, 2003
Fabulous poem Anita! The last line is perfect.Wish I wrote it ;) LOL
Chrissie

Reviewed by Jessica Stanfield (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2003
Lady A,
This is wonderful! I really like, "And felt his soul, speak through his eyes....he kissed her thru his gaze." Very good write, as usual!
- J -


Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on May 12, 2003
Wow! What a party. This is great......
Jill :)


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