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Trip to Washington, D.C.

by Jill Eisnaugle — Read all 611 poems by Jill Eisnaugle

While written in first-person, this poem is entirely fictional. I have never been to Washington, D.C. and merely wanted to write a limerick chain poem.

Tuesday, March 18, 2008


Poem Artwork

 

 
 
I’d gone to a shop in D.C.
Just my dear beloved and me
He started to squirm
As if he’d seen a worm
Then, kneeled beneath the old oak tree.
 
His actions came as a surprise
Just as the fear found in his eyes
But, on one knee posed
He reached back for a rose
An action that was very wise.
 
Then, he called out for my hand
The one thing it seemed he had planned
I looked for the ring
He did not bring a thing
But, one miniscule grain of sand.
 
I’m sure I looked rather confused
And I was not at all amused
But, soon he explained
That one present remained
Even though the gift had been used.
 
“This grain is a symbol of life
O’er the years, it has seen much strife
But, still it has stayed
Through the tough times it prayed
Just as I pray you’ll be my wife.”
 
As the teardrops welled in my eyes
I was in for one last surprise
A ring from his Mother
Brought forth by his brother
Already in the perfect size.
 
Thus, ends my long day in D.C.
Just my dear fiancé and me
Now, we’ll look ahead
Toward the day we’ll wed
And share love for eternity.
                                                  
© 2008 – Jill Eisnaugle’s Poetry Collection
Houston's 1560 The Game (KGOW-AM)



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Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 19, 2008
Almost Victorian like in presentation, but so heartwarming and wonderful. Washington, DC is one of those places that everyone should try to visit at least once. So much history, so many places to visit, been there a number of times over the years and love it more each time I go....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on March 19, 2008
...wonderful story...unique...creative thoughts here hold romance of a capitol surrounding...and sentiment of a mother's ring...make this poetic proposal one well penned...
John

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on March 19, 2008
Very well written Jill, I must say it is different for you and you did it beautifully. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 18, 2008
I'm used to limericks being a bit bawdy, so this was a surprise. Could be anywhere. It's the sentiment that counts.

Ron

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 18, 2008
A beautiuful romantic work that is almost Victorian in it's simple design of love and romance offered so sweetly....

Well done Jill
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 18, 2008
Jill you can write in any style and it's beautiful, this was especially charming and full of endearment!

Reviewed on March 18, 2008
This is beautiful, Jill, for having never been there, you took me there! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on March 18, 2008
awwwww,,a beautful message about life,, this is most uplifting and full of promises,,, excellent
Christine

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on March 18, 2008
Fantastic limerick chain! I enjoyed the message of the poem as well...it took me back 19 years ago to when my hubby proposed.
Cryssa :~)


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