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· Worries Are Like Small Potatoes

· Five Generations of Women, Five Generations of Strength

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· The Grand Prize

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· Daddy’s Spirit Keeps Fallen Fathers in Children’s Hearts, Year-Round

· Broadcasting Relationship “Status” (on a shirt)? Is It Funny or Desperate?

· Resurrecting Love at Easter: Is It a Good Idea?

· The X’s & O’s of Love & Romance

· Relationship Obituaries: A New Way to Move Forward?

· Marriage Proposals by Women: Tips and Is Trend Really for Leap Year Only?

· The “After-Valentine” Valentine’s Day

· Valentine’s Day Gifts: Are Secrets and Surprises Taboo?

· Re-gifting (for the Right Reasons)


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Remember When

by Jill Eisnaugle — Read all 611 poems by Jill Eisnaugle

This is a fictional poem about overcoming the end of a relationship and surviving the ending, better than ever.

Wednesday, March 26, 2008


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Remember when the butterflies flew softly on the breeze?
Remember when you said hello with the greatest of ease?
Remember when the starlight fell, come morning’s newborn glow?
Remember when I was someone you were grateful to know?
Remember when the springtime rain gave way to summer’s heat?
Remember when my smile could serve to make the day complete?
Remember when I let you pour your heart upon my sleeve?
Remember when I questioned why you felt you had to leave?
 
Remember when you spoke my name and jumped, due to the chance?
Remember when you shared your pain and I told you to dance?
Remember when your tender hand was clinched tightly with mine?
Remember when you longed to be my special Valentine?
Remember when the sea gulls flew across the sand so brown?
Remember when the clouds were high; the sky in fluffy down?
Remember when we talked for hours without missing a beat?
Remember when you let me know goodbye was bittersweet?
 
Remember when I gave my all, in each and every way?
Remember when my tears would fall, as I begged you to stay?
Remember when you turned and left, without any words spoken?
Remember when I hit my knees; my heart hopelessly broken?
Remember when you trudged ahead to follow all your dreams?
Remember when the stars gave way to beautiful moonbeams?
If you remember this, my love, you’ll note each beam is bright;
Then, you will see that I’ve moved on and everything’s all right.
                                                              
© 2008 – Jill Eisnaugle’s Poetry Collection

 

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Reviewed on March 29, 2008
What an excellent piece, forgetting weakens us I think but remembering strengthens as your poem so well illustrates. In gratitude forever for caring and sharing. Mikii

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 28, 2008
Yes, I remember it well...

Ron

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on March 26, 2008
It takes time to get to a place such as this... But the journey with you was beautiful~
Cryssa

Reviewed by Nate Oakley (Reader)
Reviewed on March 26, 2008
Jill,
As past experience has taught me, memories fade over time and in the end, we always find our way to where we're meant to be. ;-)
You're so strong-willed and content with your life, wherever it leads, that you have an amazing ability to make everyone around you, stronger, too. I am no exception; you help me more than you realize.
Hands down, you can write about anything!

Take care, my "sunshine,"
Nate

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 26, 2008
Always sad when a loving relationship goes sour, but it does happen. However, we do learn from it and through it we become stronger....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on March 26, 2008
Beautiful memories of yesterdays and I do believe we all have them, a great write, thank you for sharing Jill.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed on March 26, 2008
So many beautiful rememberings - they always help us grow - a broken heart, and a recovery devine. What more to be added to life's song...
Lovely poem, Jill!

Micke

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on March 26, 2008
Oh I so Love a Happy ending! This is a stunning poem in every sense..and the repetition of 'Remember' is so soothing. I Love the variety of imagery brought up too..like a wonderful patchwork quilt!
Just excellent..Love and Blessings, Diana.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on March 26, 2008
Remember When??,,,,,and on to new Memories,,, Very well done Jill!

Reviewed on March 26, 2008
Wonderful write, Jill; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love from Burleson, your fellow Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on March 26, 2008
Jill,

You delve where few dare to and make it believable - this is excellent!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on March 26, 2008
Jill this was a true joy to read. Lovely and meaningful poem

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on March 26, 2008
Full of great memories, I have a poem in my book with this very title, someday I'll post it here on the den. Well written!

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
Reviewed on March 26, 2008
Jill,

Much enjoyed, I like the repetitive stanzas as a tool for conveyance. You capture love, alienation and loss with recovery very well.

~D.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on March 26, 2008
Beautiful poem about letting go and forgiveness.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on March 26, 2008
MOST BEAUTIFUL, ROMANTIC POEM!!!!!!!!!!!! WORDS, FULL OF LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 26, 2008
sweet and peaceful--a good place to come to after the turmoil of a break up

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on March 26, 2008
Very well done Jill.


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