A gang of teenagers brood at a bus
shelter's bisected plastic funnel canopy.
November wraps them in damp lamp night,
a gnome wraps them genomic rhyme.
Folk leak off trained to bark at strangers.
The road's like an engine gone flat.
Guys rev their bikes on the pavements
& dolls sit it out on the rails.
No one crosses & the air gets split
in a garrotted shout, a ritual the dark
engulfs with their homeless hunchback
sorrows & numb pallid faces.
The bus rolls in bringing an electric city,
dropping off bodies, threat, concealed,
felt but never spoken of as
the door closes with a lie of security.
It's glad to depart; even before it arrived
they'd known not to count on it,
there's no protection for their exposure,
they're offered none, they give none.
Huddled into an end, as in a stadium,
their mobile programmed text message
reads, "You're all shit & you know it.
Bleep...bleep, so much for Alpha Man."
gift of tongues
"socio genetic linguistics"
What an interesting term! There are so many lines I like.
"November wraps them in damp lamp night.
The road's like an engine gone flat.
No one crosses & the air gets split
The bus rolls in bringing an electric city"
The piece thrills a throbbing, dark-image side that people love to have stirred up with an uneasiness that has them looking over their shoulders... Love this!
Erin
..what an exceptional line..superb!!
loved it!!!... unique approach indeed...give us another...oh go on lOL..you can DO it Robin!!!
Vesna :)
they'd known not to count on it,
there's no protection for their exposure,
they're offered none, they give none.
Huddled into an end, as in a stadium,
their mobile programmed text message
reads, "You're all shit & you know it.*
Bleep...bleep, so much for Alpha Man."
Robin....powerful write my friend....love n luck....BHUWAN!!!