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Describe Adonis

by Robin Ouzman Hislop — Read all 170 poems by Robin Ouzman Hislop

Friday, November 21, 2003

Describe Adonis.

In red anemone let Adonis come
whence of his anointed blood have so sprung
from gored loin wild boar Syrian.
The Nile has bled her mensturation,
on her mire the swineherd has trodden,
scattered & harvest threshed the seed & corn,
consecrated it in Astarte´s name,
her Byblos temple of red anemone.

She who will suckle him from her nipple,
red as anemones, milk of life & death,
whose lips of blood & wine kiss fickleless
from the moon the sun born child´s full
face, together embraced in red anemone,
as the bards song of the ages is sung.

Copyright Robin Ouzman Hislop 2003
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Describe Adonis



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Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2003
ahhh..the Master Poet is at it again..brilliant write..!!!!!

'The Nile has bled her mensturation'

Excellent!!!..why can't I think of lines like that..well..hmmm..it's because I'm an apprentice poet learning from the Master himself...:)

Thankyou!

vesna

Reviewed by Tyler Wiseman
Reviewed on November 23, 2003
You found a fine method for this work, it is colorful and descriptive. Classic themes suitably stated, I enjoyed this work thoroughly.

Cheers.

Reviewed by Rodd Jokre (Reader)
Reviewed on November 22, 2003
I can feel what's here... Good write...

Rodd

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 22, 2003
Mesmerizing Robin...Adonis from the name Tammuz... His name is Semitic a variation of the name Yahweh in the old testament, very mystical write...

Reviewed by Oirdheirc Mor (Reader)
Reviewed on November 22, 2003
Hi Robin,
This is good stuff.
Looks like you are back in the Lebanon tasting the waters from the River of Immortal Love.
You have just inspired me to write something, give me five minutes, if it goes wrong it is all your fault.

Oirdheirc Mor


Reviewed by Helga Ross
Reviewed on November 22, 2003
Rich with images and syllabic sounds.
I enjoyed reading this.

Reviewed on November 22, 2003
Adonis taking the face and form of the Stag... nursing from Ceridwen, the Great Boar, during Beltane. It's interesting as all seems to commingle, and come from one and same source. And then... perhaps it does. I'm fascinated, Robin.
~Alexandra~

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
Wow, Robin...Adonis never looked so good until described by your unique piece, a wonder, indeed, the face of sun's youth. :)


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