This seems to me like a good start to an excellent poem. It left me expecting more. Like a poem not yet ripe. There is just so much to be explored and imagery invoked in the myriad ways we each deal out our love.
Personally I'd like to see you develop this one much further. Knead it in you mind. Roll it around. Prod it and poke it and let time and the warmth of your imagination make it rise and give it substance.
Blending Southern Gothic mystery romance, fantasy, theater, dance, music, and flashes of humor, tells the story of a pair of lovers in two separate time periods who find themselves battling an evil fifty years apart.
Enjoy twists and surprising turns in this erotic collection of sexy love stories based on seven classic fairy tales. There are romantic interludes to touch your heart and plenty of scorching sex to warm your coldest nights.
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Chrissie
This seems to me like a good start to an excellent poem. It left me expecting more. Like a poem not yet ripe. There is just so much to be explored and imagery invoked in the myriad ways we each deal out our love.
Personally I'd like to see you develop this one much further. Knead it in you mind. Roll it around. Prod it and poke it and let time and the warmth of your imagination make it rise and give it substance.
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Don L.
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