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Finding My Smile

by Edie M. Batstone — Read all 134 poems by Edie M. Batstone

As the hectic Christmas celebrations ramp up, it's essential to remember the quiet peace that should take precedence and to work on the gifts created by our warm smiles.

Monday, November 26, 2018



The gentle movements of a Tai Chi session this morning had me
Watching the flow of my hands,
And once again, I felt there the wooden caress of a paddle;
I was stepping into my mental canoe,
Slipping away on daydreams
Of early morning escapes
Beside a gentle river bank,
Feeling the solitude as I float downstream across flat water,
Free of man-made sounds in their various forms;
I close my eyes,
Enjoying the rocking of the canoe,
trusting the gentle movement of the river
to carry me along wherever it is going;
I feel again the water washing around my toes as I invite some of it aboard with every stroke of my paddle;
My memory took a deep breath and there it was: the wonderful atmosphere;
Smells of algae, fish, flowers,
And the sounds of nature; frogs, birds, and various forms of flying tag-a-longs who found it amusing to play tag on my hat and hide-and-seek around my ankles - taking the occasional nibble;
I grabbed hold of that spiritual oar of freedom,
Gave it a mental pull,
- And I smiled.
My hands, now resting,
Palms up, in peace.
Edie Batstone



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Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on November 29, 2018
powerful read, well said

never stop writing

m

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 28, 2018
A bit hard to do in winter, but you made me recall the wonderful few times that I was in a canoe in summer, putting the paddle in water and drifting along like a duck would on the placid waters of a stream or lake, keenly aware of everything going on around me.

Thanks for the memories. One way to get out from under of all those hurried and frantic Christmas activities is to just stop doing them like I have. Now, all I have to do is on a pleasant night, preferably when it is snowing, is to go out and see what others have done through their hard work to light up the night with color and to go to parties where someone has worked very hard to decorate and provide all the good food and drink of the season.

As John Lennon would say… What if we stopped celebrating Christmas?

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on November 26, 2018
Nice imagery, and always remember, It's easier to smile than frown.


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