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The Visit

by Edie M. Batstone — Read all 134 poems by Edie M. Batstone

A very personal Mothers' Day reflection on the fragile beauty and the treasures that we receive from our mothers; on the far-reaching effects of their presence and their encouragement. Happy Mothers' Day!

Friday, May 6, 2022

The Visit

A smile broke the surface,
She held out her arms,
As I opened the door to her room;
My single red rose
Seemed so little to give,
But she breathed in its lovely perfume;

"I'm sorry to keep you,
You've so much to do,
I hate being helpless
And a burden to you."

You are never a burden
You’re loved far too much;
When life becomes heavy,
Let me be your crutch.

Your life is a treasure
No body could hold;
You are never a burden,
Just because you’ve grown old;

You’ve shared all my problems,
You’ve cried for my pain,
You’ve prayed for my efforts,
And lauded my gain;

When life left me wounded,
You helped me to mend;
You gave me the honour
Of being your friend;

I look at my children,
And I see your love there,
Still shining and smiling;
The fruit of your prayer.

Your strength and example
Enlightened my way,
You carried my burden,
I thank you today.

As I sat by her bedside,
She squeezed my hand tight,
"You shouldn't have bothered,
But the rose is just right!"
Edie Batstone



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Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on May 7, 2022
Your words really touched my heart…
A wonderful tribute to a much
loved Mother…Your last verse
was so authentic…

We’ve already had our Mother’s Day
here in the UK…but I wish you
A very Happy Mother’s Day…!

Diana..🍃

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 6, 2022
Brought tears to my eyes. Fortunately my sister was always there on Mother's Day to greet her in person. While I sent my long-distance greetings either by telephone, snail mail, or email over the years.

I may have written a poem or two for her, but unless I search, I won't know after writing so many.

Reminding me again of my last visit to her in 2011 when she cried when I left, "I won't see you again!"

Ron

Reviewed on May 6, 2022
Such a lovely poem in tribute to your mother on Mother's Day. I wish I can say the same thing to my mother, but I know my mother loved me in a very special way, and I felt her love too.

Good job with this Mother's Day poem! Your mom must be very happy and content.

Sandie


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