My Hand me Downs
Let me hand you down
A cheerful smile,
A heart that’s patched with gratitude;
Let me hand you down
My map of life,
That led to upbeat attitude,
That worked around the sadnesses,
The fears, and the madnesses,
That bade me stop at every stream
That filled my heart with gladness,
Where ran the sparkling ripples
of friendship, of family;
Let me hand you down
Vintage kindnesses,
That are never out of date;
I dust them off daily,
Add to them gaily,
And count them as my surest path
Past fear and melancholy;
Let me hand you down
A child-like faith,
Hopeful, trusting
That we are safe,
Cradled in God’s love;
These precious gifts I pass to you,
I hope you’ll wear for me;
Cherish them,
Then, pass them on,
Fruit of our family tree.
Edie Batstone
I just finished reading your story, and I have to say it left quite an impression on me. The world-building, dialogue, and pacing all came together in a way that made the story feel very cinematic.
As a commissioned artist specializing in comics, Webtoons, character design, and cover art, I immediately saw the potential for a visual adaptation. Your story already feels like something readers would love to see illustrated.
If you'd like to talk more about it, feel free to contact me on Inst.gram (luna art soul).
Warm regards,
Luna