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WithinYour Eyes
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I was so greatly inspired by the sonnet that Sara Russell posted under the title "BIRD SONGS" that I just had to try my first Shakespearian sonnet. Perhaps I should call it sonnet #1. At any rate, please be kind, and you may feel free to point out any errors, like I said it's my first attempt. This is for my wife Charlene.

Within your eyes I've glimpsed the jasper sea.
And braved to search out secrets hidden there,
Mysteries of you that now belong to me.
I've drawn them from the deep with utmost care.
I've seen the gulls glide swiftly near your reef
To feed upon the flotsam by the shore;
Seen fishers catch the denizens beneath,
As bitterns wade the shallow coastal floor.
The tide pools give relief from sun and sand
To flounders who have lost their way at sea.
And I'm amazed when sky and sea and land,
Within your eyes, are looking back at me.
Within your eyes I've seen all that's divine.
And hope to make these treasures somehow mine.

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Reviewed on August 15, 2003
It is an inspired poem. A Paen that honors the dignity of the beloved one.

"Within Your Eyes" is a pleasurable reading.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU




Reviewed by Sara Russell
Reviewed on August 15, 2003
Hi Londis,
I am very impressed by this sonnet, not just because you say it is your first one (it's a great sonnet) - and very happy indeed that my Bird Songs poems inspired it. Thank you so much for your review too! I know that your wife Charlene will also love this sonnet of yours...

Also... I edit the ezine Poetry Life & Times. The October issue still needs more Featured Poets, and I like your work, so if you are interested, please post a message on my message board, and I will send you my AOL email address.

Best Regards, thanks again,

Sara L. Russell.

Reviewed on August 15, 2003
Don't sound like a first time... excellent!!!
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on August 15, 2003
Londis,
May I say...please...take a bow.
Wonderful!
John

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on August 15, 2003
A beautiful write
Excellent reading

William

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 15, 2003
Very beautiful write!!!

Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2003
Nicely formed. A true Shakespearian write. Bravo.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 14, 2003
Most Beautiful write Londis....most beautiful!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on August 14, 2003
Lonny, I am one big goose bump.. "jasper sea" <--- I was grabbed and it hasn't let go yet.. such continuity of theme, not a word that doesn't belong, doesn't ring true.. "bitterns".. "flotsam".. this is more than a poem, it's a mind picture, a flowing of images, one weaving around the next.. an entire experience.. Shakespeare, reincarnated and at his very best! You have internal rhymes.. a quiet passion one can internalize and hold. We throw the word masterpiece around, perhaps.. I say, this is where that word must land.. you have defined it. I'm absolutely boggled. GOD, this is gorgeous poetry! I am literally shaking..katy xox.

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on August 14, 2003
BEAUTIFUL write!
The first of many
more..I hope.
~Excellent!

~~Linda~~


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