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Oh,Doctor. What Beautiful Brown Eyes You Have. Continuation
by Joy L. Hale → (All Poetry by Joy L. Hale)
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Doctor Mark Reynolds and Vanessa meet for dinner, learning about one another through conversation and admiring glances.

 

Arriving early, Mark had chosen a table
Facing the front of the restaurant
Eagerly awaiting Vanessa's arrival,
His eyes were glued to the front door

When Vanessa entered the room
He was aware of the subtle turning
Of heads and the soft murmur of appreciation
As she walked slowly to his table, never
Taking her eyes off the man before her.

Dressed in seafoam green, the silken texture
Of her dress molded her body like a well worn glove
Her glossy red hair, worn in a Veronica Lake
Style, enhanced the countours of her face
Falling gently to her lovely shoulders.

After ordering drinks and selections were made
From the menu, they relaxed and enjoyed the
The candelit room and casual ambience
Of their fellow diners.

Discussing everything from the weather to
The political arena and the state of the economy,
Mark soon realized that the woman before him
Was not just a gorgeous beauty, but a woman
Of considerable knowledge and substance.

Talking about their careers, he asked her if she was
A model? Possibly a movie star who had chosen
The silver screen as her goal in life?
Laughing, she answered "no... not at all."

She confessed that she was a biochemist  who
Loved the career path she had chosen. 
"A biochemist? I thought they were all fusty old codgers
With accumulated dust on their glasses, wearing 
Argyle sweaters and plaid trousers!"

Mark wasn't sure if he was giddy on the wine or
The fascinating woman who was his dinner companion
But he did know this beauty was capturing his heart
And that his hormones were were reaching an all time high!

He knew that evening, as he felt the winds of change
Blow across his reluctant heart, that no other woman
Would affect him the way Vanessa did.
Mark suspected he had found the woman who would
Complete him,  possibly to become his wife.

The jagged edge of reality thrust deeply into his core,
Ripping through his pre-conceived notions
Of remaining a confirmed bachelor; his resistance
Ebbing away like the pacific tide fleeing from a sandy beach.

Copyright July 28th, 2011
All rights reserved

Vanessa will share her thoughts  next....

 


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 Reviews of "Oh,Doctor. What Beautiful Brown Eyes You Have. Continuation"
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on September 22, 2011
Well She has stolen his heart and it is now her's to have and to hold.I have to continue on now. Great writing Joy.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by J Howard
Reviewed on September 7, 2011
came straight away to the continuation...and very satisfied ...you do dream in a powerful way!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 12, 2011
I enjoy this tale, Joy. Thank you for sharing it via your verses here. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed on August 5, 2011
Read them both, so well penned and romantic

Reviewed on August 3, 2011
enjoyed, can picture this. a story even. Morgan

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on August 2, 2011
This is amazing, Joy! I LOVE the way you've presented this...your phrasing is captivating! Bravo!!!!!!

Hugs,
Anna

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 31, 2011
Many a woman throughout history has quickly changed a man's pre-conceived notions of remaining a bachelor. A timeless story, indeed, and very well told.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on July 30, 2011
THE WAIT WAS WORTH IT...I WILL BE BACK FOR THE NEXT PART, FOR SURE! THANKS FOR SHARING...LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Clarence Prince
Reviewed on July 29, 2011
"Ebedding away like the pacific tide fleeing from the sandy beach." It's just another way of saying he was completely swept off his feet, Joy. Nice Job!

Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
Reviewed on July 29, 2011
READS LIKE A TERRFIC NOVEL...MORE~~~ ANNA

Reviewed by James Johnston
Reviewed on July 28, 2011
Joy, it seems that Vanessa has really captured his attention. It appears that he has reconsidered his first impression (model, movie star, etc.) He is impressed by her career options and now begins to opt for a permanent relationship. I am very curious about Vanessa's reaction to his obvious change of heart! Please don't keep us waiting! (I pray that you feel like writing soon....Just Jim

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on July 28, 2011
Visually captivating, your descriptors
hold, Joy, and you are able to maintain pace
and suspense and that vital touch of gentle
mystery throughout.

John

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 28, 2011
Although the story line is great and really keeps one interest, my mind tends to wonder how great this would be if written in book format... will be waiting for next installment.
fee

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 28, 2011
Continuing the story, and as always energetically and well-written.

Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on July 28, 2011
A delightful story and great read indeed Laura

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on July 28, 2011
Joy, thanks to Tivo and Video on Demand, these days I seldom have to wait for the conclusion of story I'm interested in..... TIL NOW!!!

Don't you know that us old codgers can't remember from one day to the next,,,, Come on with it, don't keep me hanging..... (Kidding,,, Dick)

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on July 28, 2011
Doctor or not, such insight of a Woman he has...
~Lady Joy~
Thanks to you putting your heart into his, describing
him so gallantly in your poetry, and giving life to
fellow romantics, who so appreciate your art!!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on July 28, 2011
I am so enjoying this entertaining story, Joy, as you know how to heighten the mood!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on July 28, 2011
...hmmmm I think this is a common problem..so many want, but won't commit..I will be tuning in !!!

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on July 28, 2011
Well, go figure! Along comes the right woman; not only unbelievably beautiful but with brains as well and, WAM. there goes another confirmed bachelor.
Good continuing story, my friend.
Mark

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on July 28, 2011
Ah shucks


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