could I ever leave you
never,would I my love
I present myself to you
silver wings of a dove
one who aches
so deep within
living without love
is to be living in sin
captivated by your kindness
measured by my worth
heaven does not accept
what is not finished on earth
hands are reaching out to you
a heart schattered
not much left to see
one piece left
I place near you
from me.
~
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Reviews of "Remember"
Reviewed by Jerry Andrews (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
Very good, Floreann- and I don't say so unless I mean it. One correction: shattered-typo- drop the c- I like the way you write. Thanks- Jerry
Reviewed by maryfrances
Reviewed on August 3, 2003
Flore, this is another fine piece of writing you have presented. smiling, maryfrances
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 1, 2003
Your writing is great everywhere! Beautifully done!
tony:)
excellent Floreann and welcome to the Den
looking forward for more love like this
William
In Spirit,
Bear