a spirit so near
whisper to me wind
gentle touch
butterfly kisses
passionate thoughts
one step taken,
into your soul
you are brave
you are bold,
tempt my mind
with wishes galore
are you the one
could there be more
a secret I share with thee
Hollow soul
what can it be?
~*~
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Reviews of "The Hollow Soul"
Reviewed by C. Gourlay (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2003
a nicely written, mysterious piece- thanks :)
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 8, 2003
Gently wonderful poem. Love the picture.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 8, 2003
Floreann I just love your work, it's so soft and romantic and just plain beautiful!
Crystal Reed thought she had met the perfect man. Instead she finds herself entangled in a web of obsessive love and dark secrets, a world that has become tainted by deception and treachery.
Somewhere beyond...there must be a soul!!
Just love your Poem!!
Love Tinka
~Chrissie