Awesome Candida! I like how you give this poem time to unfold. It's so appropriate. You set a mood and tone that's so in sync. with the theme, which is a chilling one. I could almost feel the coldness myself. Great job, and thanks for responding to my poetry. Your feedback means a lot.
In the end they'll all be dancin'--all them ones that didn't die.... Dance with me in the shadows amidst the lightning and the thunder, and all that nu-cu-lar debris. See the big bang from the other side, and then open that cellar door. Go down into
*brrrrrrrrrr* shivery, intense, powerful, EXCELLENT write!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
*saving this one--*
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Excellent
Reindeer
Amor
Loved it!
~Nikki~