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A Turquoise Sea
by Janet P Caldwell → (All Poetry by Janet P Caldwell)
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Missing an old friend...

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I miss ya babe.
Too many moons have passed,
the tide is out
I wonder if it will come back.

Looking at the October sky
I reminisce of days gone by, your
brown hair, messy and wind blown.

Will there come a day
our place in the sun?
A walk in the park, transcending
moon beams and stars.

Will we ever be warm again,
breath the same air. Only
when I close my eyes
attempting your fingers
through my wet hair.

I do see and realize
you running to me,
laughing and free falling
into love's illusions
in a turquoise sea.

ŠJanet Caldwell 2005-2008


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 Reviews of "A Turquoise Sea"
Reviewed by Ronald Segroves (Reader)
Reviewed on February 2, 2010
The brown hair is turning a little grey, but the memories are as beautiful as the turquoise sea.
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on November 21, 2009
DAY DREAMING A WONDERFUL DREAM OF BETTER DAYS AHEAD. GREAT PHRASES AND IMAGERY. GOD BLESS AND THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Bronwen Winter Phoenix
Reviewed on February 9, 2009
Very lovely imagery used in this poem Janet, I can just imagine the sea you are describing (and nice picture, too!). Hope to read more of your work.
Reviewed by SaPAth AnANd
Reviewed on September 21, 2006
Creative pen in full bloom!May I rest my mind in a turqoise sea,coz I really want my illusions free.Well written Janet!

Bom Bhole!
Rosh

Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels
Reviewed on September 13, 2006
I enjoyed.....
Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on March 15, 2006
Beautiful..vivid, your poem and picture are in harmony, Jan. Missing someone is bittersweet when the sentiment is fed with such memories.

Gina
Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on December 9, 2005
I can imagine myself in this poem!
Very creative write! I have wanted to
be in that "turquoise sea" a few times, too!
(grin) Love all your work. Do you like going
by "Janny" now? I like to go by "Bek" now.
Bek
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on October 20, 2005
enjoyed the read, how did i miss this one before?
Reviewed by Tamara McGregor (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2005
This is one of your best. I think we can all find ourselves in this one. Let me fall into the turquoise sea!!!!
Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
Reviewed on July 16, 2005
Beautiful write, Janny!!! I think we all have someone like this in our past, someone we can't regret having known and still miss in moments.

God bless,

Sandie.
Reviewed by Phyllis Du'Gas (Reader)
Reviewed on June 10, 2005
Beautiful!
Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on May 30, 2005
This is a lovely write, Janet, with which I identify. I have someone like this in my past, someone I can't regret having known and still miss in moments. Thank you for posting this. ~~Nordette
Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on May 29, 2005
Almost forgot to review you.

You are absolutely wonderful my darling.

The poem is good too
hugs and kisses
Ian
Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
Janet,

So happy to see you here! You take us into the "moments"
with you! Hoping this poem reaches its destination!
I have missed your work!

Much Warmth,
Maria
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
I can so relate to this, Janet. I am totally taken in by your verses. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
some about the October sky that really moves.
Really good write!

Rich Suarez
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
Absolutely excellent!!

Love You too Sis!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Bob Holt (Reader)
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
This is why you're still the best.

Bob H
Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
Lovely work here...I love the simplicity of message and structure which you have combined with outstanding imagery.
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
Yep-Ya Jus Cinot Loke Bak-Wards-Huh!

But You're Back!

TRASK
Reviewed by C. J. Stevens
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
A beautiful poem. Poignant. It has a staying power that few poems have.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
Janet,

Stunning imagery and powerful longing...sigghhh, this is a beauty! You and I were on the same page, thinking of the sea...of course, it's barely left my mind since the cruise I took in February...I'm ready to go AGAIN!!!! LOL Well done, Janet, well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
Wow the visual imagery you created with this poem.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
beautiful! :)
Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
It is always a joy to read your work.
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
Beatifully written Janet! Wistful mood piece, well done!
Good to see you!;-)

Love,
Eileen
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