One Order of Blue Toes and a Cap on the Side (poem) by Josephine M Bohen on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Larry Skahill

Reviewed on June 14, 2002

I picked "10" because there is no "11"
10 is over-used - this is a 10
paint each toey bluey if you want

Reviewed by Max Scratchmann (Reader)

Reviewed on June 14, 2002

Brilliant!

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

Works for me!! great write. Thank you for the kind comments on my work.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

give each toe a different color ;)

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

Paint them toey nails blue, blue, blue. Funny stuff.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

Blue is nice...how about gluing some liitle sparkly stones on the nails as well,fake diamonds or saphires?Mine are just painted boring old red...my guys ex-girfriend always did hers blue...he askes me to use blue now and then,but I want him to know WITHOUT a doubt 'it's ME'..so I can never use blue...once he nagged me about it and I just said 'if u want blue toes go back to her'...he never asked again.However I do like the blue colour very much...a shame really.
I loved this poem...strong message...one I love:'Be you, always be you'.Great advice.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

Great write Josephine. You make up words too? Oh I understood "toeys" just fine :)

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

You radical you. Love this one.

Reviewed by Kathleen Herrick (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

LOL loved this.....yes do keep going in your Own style. Perfection is at it's best only when we do this. ;0)

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

I've learnt that some past great poets always made up new words of their own, and made new format and rules in writing.....and we've all follow their rules and called these "formats". Very interesting!

May Lu $*_*$ / Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Scada (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

Lady, I love your made-up words and the way you express yourself. Don't change anything!!

Love Scada

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

Keep making up the words! Great write!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

rules...who made those up....creation comes from you...be a goddess!

debby

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

thisey flowey soey goodey
What words are you making up they are all real to me

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

Josie don't you dare change!...I won't read if you do...so there...;-) Love the photo of you and your daughter, both so lovely...your smiles say it all...;-)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

lovely rebellious piece.

Reviewed by D. Enise

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

I love this!!! Keep being "YOU"..Blue~ Toe nails and most definetly word toys!! *S*
~Jen