I don’t do criticism
too well
really I suck at it
“what you really meant to say”
is the stupidest thing I’ve ever heard
what I really meant to say
is what I said period
my stuff
is really pretty
straightforward
modern
poetry
not a lot of hidden meanings
meandering thoughts
hidden innuendos
just straight from the gut
raw
would you ask Picasso
to straighten out that face
would you ask dickinson
to define
what the hell she’s talking about
just cause their dead
we
figure they’re unfixable
and maybe pay attention to the
ART
of what they gave us
now constructive critism well that’s a horse of a different color
misspells
proper pluralization
misused contractions blah blah blah
ok
that stuff I can deal with
but
never
assume
that I did not say
exactly
what I meant to
and if you don’t get it
sorry to hear about your
bad luck
frankly I don’t give a damn
there
I feel better
that’s freedom of speech
and I am free
to write
as
I
damn well please
watch me
an artist friend of mine recently was told that her work wasn't what the gallery was looking for, Bah HumBug. The color schemes too bright, the matting all wrong, basic bullshit. I want all artists to know everywhere that what you do, as long as it's from your gut is ART. Just because some dimwit says different, if it MOVES you, then it is valid, if it moves someone else that's nice, but keep at it, don't squelch your joy for someone elses idea of how it SHOULD be, chances are they're just stupid.
kay nuff ranting.
late
NOELLA CASTRO ROCKS!!!!!!!!
oh and the owner of that gallery will rue the day
not a threat a promise
let's just open our own gallery
next door
HA
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Reviews of "it's ART baby"
Reviewed by Gumby Pokey (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2002
Not sure I am getting what this means after all im just a toy and the only art i know is Art Linkletter
Ok seriously
I can't agree with you more art is perception of senses and as long as it gets a response it is art because it has caused a reaction and because it comes from the heart of an individual
What are you trying to say Jo? Hahaha... sorry. Couldnt help myself. This is very good. I relate.
Reviewed by Tim Horton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2002
Our opinions are what make us all unique. People cannot tell others how to feel, act, etc. We are individuals with different perpectives on everything. Nice write!
I also love your poetry and style,I hope I am not the one who's upset you but I looked over the past poems and think I am off the hook,anyway Josephine... don't let anyone upset you ...your opinion of you is what matters (in the end)and that goes for your work too...please believe in you always for you are unique and worthwhile no matter what anyone thinks and for what it's worth ...I think you are very witty and an excellent poet.from kay devenish
Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2002
Great poem. You're right, Josie. A lot of artists were not recognized in their lifetime. Some writers self-published their works before their writing received recognition. My feeling about art is this--some art is meant to be mass produced for commercial consumption, and some art is timeless and reveals something deep and profound about who we are and what our purpose is on this earth. So when some cute teen idol sings "Girl, you drive me crazy / I need you bad tonight"--you know which category this art belongs to.
March to your own beat, & if necessary, start your own parade! Never give up! Failure can be 99% sheer laziness! Good write! See, you inspired me!
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2002
Hey,, now I like your spirit and you are so right. Who is to say the apple I paint has to be round, I may just want to paint a square one. LOL...great powerful write here. (((Pats on back))) Floria
Josie hope I always remain on your friendly side;-)lol...but really I agree, having had some oil paintings turned down because I hadn't sold any up to that point(a beginner) it really ticked me, and I did sell soon afterward. Some are very "upper crust" don't you know;-).
Ok seriously
I can't agree with you more art is perception of senses and as long as it gets a response it is art because it has caused a reaction and because it comes from the heart of an individual
Tim
not us.....
Love, JC xoxoxo