when the words are gone
but not
when I know what I want to say
but can't
then I think
the thing to do
is
not
or at least wait
until I figure it out
until I know exactly how I want it
until I know
what the hell it is that I just can't seem
to
say
and why
if
I ever do
I promise
I'll write about it
for now
I won't
or at least
I'll just
wait
tormented like I am
in trying to figure it out
(((josie))) i hate it, too...you'll get over it...just write what's in your heart. good write, my friend...i've been there *i call 'em brain farts LOL* ((((HUGS)))) and love, karla. :)
Reviewed by Mom
Reviewed on May 28, 2003
What are you trying to say?? It was well written, but I am just curious?
Love ya, MOM
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2003
Excellant Piece Josie! I have been there one too many times as of late, so I've started turning to penning my dreams.
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
You what drives me crazy? Is just saying it, rushing into it without much thought and then deliberating for sometimes years afterwards on how I could have said it better.
which is why you shine! making silk purse out of sows ears defeating the premise that it can't be done;-)!You do it all the time Josefina;-)!!!your the best example of never say never!
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Just don't fart...you might just fly to the moon...lol
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Love ya, MOM
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
Go Into Silence...
TRASK
Your poem was well said.
Leland
Reindeer
Candy
I found this piece elegant, loved the mysterious tail...until then...
Rod
Nancy