Great poem, flows beautifully, Mary. We are all gone through that kind of illusion or images and that image is so sadly real when you are in love...you get blinded by love. Unfortunately not all of us can find true love and when it comes, sometimes its too late...
Love, Ankin
Reviewed by prabodh ranjan
Reviewed on December 2, 2008
fantasy is a creative imagination or an unrestrained fancy;a capricious idea..
well u hav explained d meaning very clearly but since it's a poetry try 2 follow rhyming sequence. The rhyme echoes the almost hypnotic effect...dis will make it better.....
Reviewed by Samantha Williams (Reader)
Reviewed on July 19, 2007
Love it! I wrote a short review on it for my school english lesson and was very well praised! I know how it feels to create your own vision of another person only to find they are completely different.
Reviewed by peeksi pinus (Reader)
Reviewed on January 1, 2007
nice work but sorry 2 say smthng is missng thts nt mking it direct 2 heart.May I knw why?
I love a good fantasy. I do not like being confused. It's like knowing someone and not knowing them all rolled up into one. You've explained it exactly how we have, at times, felt this way.
Sometimes fantasy of another person creates deadly result for oneslf; especially the other person has no idea that he/she had been fantasized.
What you put into your own mind of another has no bearing of what he/she is really like in realities. Some went to extremities when creating fantasies about another person.
Fantasies are just fantasies, they are not realities. People should be able to differentiate the two, and not to do harm to another because of their own fantasies.
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Love, Ankin
well u hav explained d meaning very clearly but since it's a poetry try 2 follow rhyming sequence. The rhyme echoes the almost hypnotic effect...dis will make it better.....
What you put into your own mind of another has no bearing of what he/she is really like in realities. Some went to extremities when creating fantasies about another person.
Fantasies are just fantasies, they are not realities. People should be able to differentiate the two, and not to do harm to another because of their own fantasies.
Anyway...this gives me a chance to rant...
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)