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Pale Art
by Lawrance G Lux → (All Poetry by Lawrance G Lux)
  
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Authorship coarse or fine,
Brilliant discourse of lines
Assembled to please and edify;
Still remains marks on paper
As Sunburn on skin,
Trying to transmit the pain
Of once living event.

Words flow like an artic stream
Churning through the still frozen ice,
Wanting Sunlight to brighten and heat;
The Writer's choice like frozen steak
Needing the Stove of life.
What Source can the Writer suck upon,
Except the sorrows of his own Soul.

Copyright2002.Lawrance George Lux


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Reviewed on February 11, 2003
What Source can the Writer suck upon,
Except the sorrows of his own Soul.

--Such is the sweet sorrow we draw upon.
lawrence, thank you for sharing this one.

best regards,
Minerva~

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on October 28, 2002
I like the way you make strong statements. (What if the writer sips at life's nectar?)

Gina

Reviewed by Tova Gabrielle
Reviewed on July 6, 2002
Deeply inspiring. resonant and from a resevoir hidden that connects souls. See? You inspired me. I particularly loved the folowing:

Still remains marks on paper

Trying to transmit the pain


Words flow like an artic stream
Churning through the still frozen ice,

Needing the Stove of life.
What Source can the Writer

the sorrows of his own Soul.


Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2002
It is through our sorrows that we find that happiness that we can write about. Good write.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 5, 2002
splendid expressions

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on May 5, 2002
Sublime write...

Reviewed on May 5, 2002
They write about joys and happiness too. Most poets writes very honestly about how they feel with no pretense.

At least I don't.

Sandie Angel :o)


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