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Oh! baby why don't you let me in
by SaPAth AnANd → (All Poetry by SaPAth AnANd)
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You say
You have to think
And need some time alone
For us to link
My wishes to be near you
To hold you
To caress you
And to love you
From the moment
You talked to me
Just like another guy
From the morning
You slammed
The door right on my face
Iam unwanted
Unwanted by you
Oh!baby why don't you let me in
Why can't we let the love begin
Now baby here Iam
Far from you
Living my life
Feeling blue
Under the lonley moon
To love you
Someday very soon




Copyright 2006 Roshan Tulachan


   

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 Reviews of "Oh! baby why don't you let me in"
Reviewed on November 16, 2006
Roshan~ I hope for much Better days ahead of you!
Great poem
With a tough feeling!
A REason 4 Everything is how I try to understand things!
If it is meant for you!
YOu will be the one in her Heart and on the phone!
My prayers are with you!
For Happiness to follow!
Great poem of depth...

WArm HuGs, Sheee

Reviewed on November 16, 2006
Oh, how love can give us grief! So close as just a door apart; then miles apart. Prayers for a reunion for you, Roshan

Micke

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on November 16, 2006
Baby it's cold outside. Just another song but relevant in this case. Hope she'll open the door. Victor

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 16, 2006
Oh!baby why don't you let me in
Why can't we let the love begin

I hope that door opens soon, Roshan!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 15, 2006
It seems we are looking for love in all the wrong places. The ones we want want somebody else;-)Hope you it works out for you Roshan!
Fine poem!

ET

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 15, 2006
Faint heart never won fair maidens heart. If she is the one, beg, plead, cry, then try to regain your dignity..

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on November 15, 2006
I also thinks you got hit with a love bug tender and OH so sweet ROSH>>>>>>Beautiful
Light & peace,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 15, 2006
Methinks if you gotta beg, let the guy go, his lose, he'll see that someday . . .

Reviewed on November 15, 2006

"Oh! baby why don't you let me in"
A beautiful, sad profession of love.
I think love will prevail.
Thank you for sharing this emotionally heartfelt write, it was a pleasure to read.

Sincerely,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm



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