Eternal Love (A Sonnet)
by Charles Keller — Read all 159 poems by Charles Keller
For my wonderful wife...
Thursday, August 30, 2007
Eternal Love (A Sonnet)
I wonder what my final thought will be
As my struggling heart ceases pumping life
What sight will be the last my eyes will see?
When peaceful slumber overtakes all strife
If only you could see how truly you
Breathe life into these lungs and my soul too
If your blue eyes are in my line of sight
Just one last happy smile my lips will form
And as my life’s light turns to endless night
When death’s calm soothes and fin’ly ends the storm
My spirit rises peacefully above
I hope you’ll know about eternal love
I’ll wait behind the moon for you someday
So two soul mates again can love and play
"Eternal Love" abounds in sublime inspiration.
Suggestion:
A revision of line ten can improve the rhythm of the second strophe.
I salute You, Poet.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
xo Taylor
Regis
Excellent penning~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Be safe,
Karen
That's just lovely. What a wonderful piece. Your wife is a lucky woman!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.