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· You're The Light of my Life

· Our Alabaster Moon

· Questions For Humanity

· Let There Be Light (A Sonnet)

· Highways Of My Soul (A Sonnet)

· Life Is Like A Shooting Star (A Sonnet)

· Ode To William Shakespeare (A Sonnet)

· Way Down Yonder In Alabam' (A Country/Western Song)

· Corpsman Up! (Senryu)

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Eternal Love (A Sonnet)

by Charles Keller — Read all 159 poems by Charles Keller

For my wonderful wife...

Thursday, August 30, 2007

Eternal Love (A Sonnet)


I wonder what my final thought will be
As my struggling heart ceases pumping life
What sight will be the last my eyes will see?
When peaceful slumber overtakes all strife
If only you could see how truly you
Breathe life into these lungs and my soul too

If your blue eyes are in my line of sight
Just one last happy smile my lips will form
And as my life’s light turns to endless night
When death’s calm soothes and fin’ly ends the storm
My spirit rises peacefully above
I hope you’ll know about eternal love

I’ll wait behind the moon for you someday
So two soul mates again can love and play


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Reviewed on September 26, 2007

"Eternal Love" abounds in sublime inspiration.

Suggestion:
A revision of line ten can improve the rhythm of the second strophe.

I salute You, Poet.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
Wow, I can oicture your two souls meting in that heavenly place beyond the moon.

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
The perfect gift for your leading lady...
xo Taylor

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on September 9, 2007
Beautiful. LIz

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 7, 2007
What a lovely sonnet; and a wonderful gift for your wife, Chuck. Thank you for sharing it. Love and blessings to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on September 4, 2007
When a man writes such beautiful words...it makes my heart skip a beat, in knowing, that they too, can express themselves all sensitive, touching that soft spot many run away from to avoid...
Excellent penning~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
You have penned a most beautiful, heartfelt tribute to your loving wife and it just makes my heart sing out in joy......

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Missy Cross (Reader)
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
"I’ll wait behind the moon for you someday..."

That's just lovely. What a wonderful piece. Your wife is a lucky woman!

Reviewed on August 30, 2007
What a lovely tribute to what real love is; congratulations to you and your wife, Chuck. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on August 30, 2007
How inspiring, a portrait of real love. I hope her beautiful blue eyes are the last and first thing you see Chuck.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
How beautfiul,great writing chuck...Hugsss


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