I'm Forever Yours (poem) by Trixie Love on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on June 6, 2003

I just love your poems, and the music you choose to accompany them

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on June 6, 2003

Lucky Lucky guy

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 6, 2003

Very beautiful Trixie.

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on June 6, 2003

Trixie,
This is so lovely and uplifting.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on June 6, 2003

Trixie, this is magnificent!!
Jenni

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on June 5, 2003

ONe of ure best...superbly done...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 5, 2003

An excellent write.....love the musical choice too!!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 5, 2003

very lovely write!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 5, 2003

Hi Trixie:

Good write and very lovely poem.

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on June 5, 2003

Hi Trixie, Lovely writing as always! Read Susan Rouse, she has a site you may find of interest.

tony:)

Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)

Reviewed on June 5, 2003

Reviewed by Bill Murray

Reviewed on June 5, 2003

Your are a special Lady to Michele. Believe me you really are.
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"My Make Believe World"

In my make believe world
I pretend you're mine,
For you're far away
what harm can it do?
In my make believe world
everything's fine,
I love you so
and it's only part time.

In my make believe world
I belong to you,
I am your woman
and will always be true,
Your love's so deep
within my heart,
Every time I think of you
the teardrops start.

I'm your woman and you're my man,
But only in my world of make believe.

Make believe, make believe, what harm can it do?
To pretend I love you and will always be true__
I knew it was wrong, as soon as it began,
For my life was committed, to another man.

The one who holds me,__close at night,
The one who knows,__this is his right,
In my make believe world, it's you___
though it never can be true,
A love he never could conceive, but it's
Only in my world of make believe.

A love he never could conceive, but it's
Only in my world of make believe.

From Michele to Trixie.

� William M. Sowman

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Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 5, 2003

This was so lovely, I loved readto ing it this evening,

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 5, 2003

How nice to see you so happy Trixie...great write!

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on June 5, 2003

An excellent write...love the musical choice too! One of my fav's!

Reviewed by Michael Kelly

Reviewed on June 5, 2003

Sweetest Trixie
Your soft beautiful words
goes right into my heart!
Like cupid shooting his arrow!
I can feel you growing inside
of my heart and soul!
You are one special beautiful lady Trixie!

Love, Michael