fine rhyme and romantic sentiment merged with cosmic imagery ...
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2006
Love the playfulness of this write!
Reviewed by Martin Hebert (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2006
~~Eileen~~another beautiful poem..to me this one sings~~
~~martin~~
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2006
Whoa, here's a hot one! :) But seriously, your form is great, and I like the way it rolls on effortlessly, no hitches in word choice or rhyme, cool, one of my faves of yours.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
computer down temporarily; hopefully in the next few weeks we will be back online. til then, we will have to do it the old way. oh, well....happy mother's day sunday! see you monday in the a.m.!
A beautiful offering that reads like a song to which the reader feels like dancing. Thank you for sharing this offering, Eileen. Love and peace to you,
I totally agree with Peter. I track who I feel sre the best here at Author's Den. You are there with the msters as far as I'm concerned eT.
Love,
Susan
A very romantic dance through the celestial splendors,
very tastefully done as ever Eileen...
Your defining and admirable qualities as a measured and highly accomplished artist are again to the fore in this strikingly beautiful composition...
You are in the upper echelons of creative writing, Eileen !
Blessings
Peter
~~martin~~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
computer down temporarily; hopefully in the next few weeks we will be back online. til then, we will have to do it the old way. oh, well....happy mother's day sunday! see you monday in the a.m.!
Glorious, beautiful, romantic verse; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
love and peace, Carole
Regis
Way to go girl!!
Love tinka
love and peace
Love,
Susan
very tastefully done as ever Eileen...
Your defining and admirable qualities as a measured and highly accomplished artist are again to the fore in this strikingly beautiful composition...
You are in the upper echelons of creative writing, Eileen !
Blessings
Peter