Eileen, the perfect description of Love's Permeating Splendour!
Be still, my heart! The graphic and the soothing music displaces every drop of stress and worldweariness, with the profundity of sharing a Genuine Love...an altogether Exquisite compositon.
I thinkk these short, rhyming verses are great. You managed to give the reader the premise of your poem in easy to read, easier to understand words. Very nice.
The meter of this rhyme is lovely - quite hypnotic. I read it with and without the music but think the entire composition really uplifting. It's good to drift and then stop for a while .... what a nice romantic interlude for a Monday...love Panda :)
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When Miranda Nolan inherits a house she soon discovers a need to solve the mysteries surrounding the late owner along with resolving the strong attraction she feels for a co-claimant who lost his hearing and faces a world of silence.
Angela Calminetti, mother of five, New Age practitioner and gifted psychic and telepath, is proud of her family ties and does everything she can to make sure that all of her younger siblings are as happy in love and marriage as she is…whether they wa
Love, B&R
Splendid write Sis!!
Love Tinka
Be still, my heart! The graphic and the soothing music displaces every drop of stress and worldweariness, with the profundity of sharing a Genuine Love...an altogether Exquisite compositon.
Love, Rhonda
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
I agree with Ed and Rufuz below..
Someone is a lucky boy..
Great flow and meter here..
Harmony
Peter
and sweeps the reader along. So very beautiful!
Myrna
Be well,
Penny
This is beauty in the gentleness of true love.
Susan