I long to kiss your rugged face To tell you I adore your eyes To snuggle in your arms embrace To feel your breath as you exhale Thrill to the vibrations between us Like low thunder in the distance Desire igniting our own lightning Arousal causing ebb and flow Our heartbeats keeping pace The shivers when I hear your voice
This scenario I long to tell you of That I can only describe as love Plays over and over in my mind It happens whenever I think of you And I think of you all the time These thoughts so truly sublime They permeate all my dreams As if no one exists besides you Often I can't help but wonder Do you feel the same as I do?
Whoever you are...
etw-2006
Sorry folks, but I know who Creator is and revere Him too much to write like this about Him;-)
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Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on October 11, 2006
Oh yes he does Eileen..he senses all your thoughts and wonders where they effuse from..he knows!!
beautiful write..
truly your work is my kinda poetry..wow!!
aieee...Jode Blon...love that song! Pure Cajun/Zaydeco...did you know this song is oft considered the Cajun National Anthem? Such a gracious poem to go with the music. Must e-mail my Loosiana friend this URL :o)
Micke
(btw, Eileen...knew it wasn't Creator, as you would have capitalized the "You"s and the "Your"s)
a wonderful poem of affection and admiration ... i hope "whoever" appreciates the sentiment ...
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 5, 2006
Ayeeeeeeee!!!! I done heard dat song somewheres before, cher, brought yoself over heah I got sumtin' ta told you . . . Ayeeeeeeeeeeee! Oh, loved that poem, it is one of your better ones of late, very sensuous in a lonely sort of way . . .
This is a good write about a fantasy lover, or friend, or companion, made even better by your creative execution Eileen.
Someone to share life's dailiness with, and someone who will accept you for who you are, at all times, and in all seasons, in sickness and health, for better or for worse, until death do you part.
Dearly beloved ...
Love the Zydeco sound byte ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on October 5, 2006
Ah if we all could only know our true soulmate...what a wonderful and more harmonious place the world would be Minx! I could really relate to this ...simply beautiful emotions, meter and descriptions...sigh. Imp x
This is a lovely poem about longing -- there is a man somewhere out there asking the very same questions, in almost the same way, and it is you he's speaking to ...Love will find YOU, sweet Eileen. When you least expect it, too.
Love,
CJ
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 4, 2006
Longing is one of the beautiful expressions of romantic poetry. I agree with George on this one Eileen.
Peace,
Joselyn
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on October 4, 2006
Tango away dear Eileen, and hope he'll tell you. Well he should after this sensous declaration. Victor
Dearest Eileen
It seems you are envisioning godly God as your beloved!! Straight to the top, the best of the best, the creator of us all; and ever seemingly elusive! Wow, you have great tastes and will never be let down!
And, we can share and still be satisfied with spiritual fruits!
Love and Hugs Suzie xoxoxo :-D
Wow! This write is great, I love the line desire igniting our own lightning, a very passionate write indeed. Keep writing girl, I'll keep reading them, there great.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
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beautiful write..
truly your work is my kinda poetry..wow!!
vesna:)
Regis
Micke
(btw, Eileen...knew it wasn't Creator, as you would have capitalized the "You"s and the "Your"s)
Paul;-)
Myrna
This is absolutely lovely. Wonderful inner thoughts and feelings.
A most beautiful poem!
Love, Sheila
Someone to share life's dailiness with, and someone who will accept you for who you are, at all times, and in all seasons, in sickness and health, for better or for worse, until death do you part.
Dearly beloved ...
Love the Zydeco sound byte ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Love Tinka
I think Suzie is right below
I am siding with her analysis..
Love
Peter
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Peace. Joyce
Peace and blessings,
Carolyn
Love,
CJ
Peace,
Joselyn
It seems you are envisioning godly God as your beloved!! Straight to the top, the best of the best, the creator of us all; and ever seemingly elusive! Wow, you have great tastes and will never be let down!
And, we can share and still be satisfied with spiritual fruits!
Love and Hugs Suzie xoxoxo :-D
Do you feel the same as I do.
Love waiting for a lover to share it with. Powerful emotions expressed in this wondeful poem.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling