As the sun sets my dear~watch it go you'll see me in its afterglow~and as the twilight fades before the moon appears~I'll be in the shadows~
When the moon pulls at the oceans tides~ I'll be right by your side~ for I am your darkness and your light~I'm with you both day and night~
Whenever you see the dawn arise~know that I am in your eyes~ and as the day proceeds~ know I'm there to meet your needs~
My love surrounds you wherever you are~ like an invisible curtain of stars~and when you enter into your dreams, I'll join you there with my best scenes~to make sure our souls unite~in glorious scenarios all through the night~
So soothing and warm, Eileen, this gift of love enhanced by the touches of nature's embrace. You do this so well...
xo Taylor
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on October 11, 2006
My love surrounds you wherever you are~
like an invisible curtain of stars~and when
you enter into your dreams, I'll join you
there with my best scenes~to make sure our
souls unite~in glorious scenarios all through the night~
Oh Eileen this is a glorious stanza..love it..saved this piece..Thankyou..
vesna:)
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on October 11, 2006
You write the most beautiful love poetry.
It is a blending of romance, the mystic and the sublime.
This is an excellent description of a minx, eyes glowing in the dark. Good thing she exudes love otherwise we'd be in trouble. Lovely poem, ET. That rainbow is working miracles. You romantic, you. Victor
This could be a lovely prayer, or the Holy Spirit whispering to you.
Either way it smoothes compassion over the senses and brightens the eyes to the mysteries around that often elude us because of our blindness to all but our own bellies.
Oooo, so soft and tender -- a beautiful love poem, Eileen. The music is perfect for it. This poem flows with love and just the hint of seduction.
Love,
CJ
Crystal Reed thought she had met the perfect man. Instead she finds herself entangled in a web of obsessive love and dark secrets, a world that has become tainted by deception and treachery.
xo Taylor
like an invisible curtain of stars~and when
you enter into your dreams, I'll join you
there with my best scenes~to make sure our
souls unite~in glorious scenarios all through the night~
Oh Eileen this is a glorious stanza..love it..saved this piece..Thankyou..
vesna:)
It is a blending of romance, the mystic and the sublime.
Genius.
Elizabeth
There are some walks you never want to end.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Peace,
Joselyn
Love Tinka
Love,
Dove
This piece is absolutely beautiful
Flows like milk and honey
exposes the beauty of the authors heart
Thanks for sharing
Love & Peace
William
Myrna
You are a terrific seamstress of evocative words that stir the passions and illuminate the mind..
I always come away from your Den both enlightened and magnified in spirit..
Bravo to you Eileen !
Peter
Either way it smoothes compassion over the senses and brightens the eyes to the mysteries around that often elude us because of our blindness to all but our own bellies.
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Love,
CJ