We are caught, frozen as if In a sculptured moment Embraced in the clay of lost time Covered with euphoria's halo Lips combined in suck of life Inhaling mixed breath of fire Passionately respiring as one
Enshrined in the tomb of Eros Forever meshed in loves caress Eyes still, but seeing beyond sight Looking into each others infinity Bodies sharing the dust of eons Minds entwined in fates labyrinth Souls sharing the balm of beatitude
OOOH Eileen, I love the moooood of this...coolness of marble and clay and heat of passion mystically enshrined and wrapped in the delicately enhancing musical tones that take you to this sacred place.
xo Taylor
I read this earlier today and the only thing I can think of is i was sidetracked by a 3 or 4 yr old??? I am glad I came back! I wanted to say that this write was definitly "Euphoria's Halo"
"Eyes still, but seeing beyond sight
Looking into each others infinity
Bodies sharing the dust of eons..."
Very creative to say the least!
Take a bow!
love and Peace~
Kimmy
This is a stunning write, Eileen, and reminds me of one I wrote once for a challenge. I titled mine "Alabaster Tombs." I love the feel of this and your lines are perfection.
Take care,
Sherry
you blow me away with poems like this, Eileen. sorry my comments are less than profound tonight and don't pay adequate homage to the grandness of this... take care, Dawn
Frozen in sculptured moment.. a lovely image this is! Nice.. very nice work!!
Myrna
Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on November 4, 2006
Oh Eileen this is touching, tender, passionate and encompasses everything we all would love to truly feel. Beautifully written and superb imagery here, bravo! Loved much. Love Imp ;)x
Don't know about moving blues and exhaustion, Eileen... You seem to have been totally excelling yourself over the past few days and this poem is KNOCKOUT! The chaos and haphazardness of being in transition can be sooooooooo creative, exciting and liberating... and your writes serve to highlight all your lights switched to green at the moment, with music to match! Yep, love should be as being moulded from the same clay, with the same vital spark initiating life and breath; the unquenchable flame. Bless you, BE WELL and THRIVE!! :)) K xx
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on November 4, 2006
Has such beautiful lines in this one..........Eyes still but seeing beyond sight. Ty,
Light & peace,
Joselyn
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 4, 2006
Yikes never though of that, but we are made up of other peoples dust and stuff.
Eileen! you've given life and breath to such wonderful feelings of love and romance.Vry beautiful!!!
Bom Bhole!
Roshan
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2006
So that's the sweet love he was whispering in her ear!!! No wonder she loved him. Such a beautiful poem. Trust our ETW to come up with such romance. Victor
I really wish you would stop showing me those erotic pics, now I need a cold shower and it is like 28 degrees out and not much better in, so it will indeed be a very COLD shower...Ed
Oh I can so "feel" this creative expression of yours, Eileen. My soul is in a turmoil; awakened by your verses. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace always,
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(((HUGS))) and love, Karla,
xo Taylor
"Eyes still, but seeing beyond sight
Looking into each others infinity
Bodies sharing the dust of eons..."
Very creative to say the least!
Take a bow!
love and Peace~
Kimmy
Carmen
Your body may be tired from your move, but methinks your mind is still SOARING!!
Micke
Forever meshed in loves caress
Now that would be a marvelous place to be Enshrined!
you select to describe the subject
Of this excellent poem
Love & Peace
William
Allen
Gina
Take care,
Sherry
Once more you have gloriously molded a glistening piece of romantic and spirtual artistry...stunning write!
Love&Hugs,
Rhonda
Atmospheric, with a caught in the mood and time effect, that both is endearing and evocative..
Extraordinary verse..
Love and Blessings
Peter
I was assuredly taken by the Titles ability to splash an image in the minds eye at once.
"Enshrined in the tomb of Eros" is certainly a line that has spiritual implications and cynical undertones.
You write with hopeful immediacy - an intuitive awareness laced with unrequited melancholy.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Myrna
love Tinka
Rusty
Light & peace,
Joselyn
Classy as always...
Bom Bhole!
Roshan
Regis