As you kissed me there my dreams soared in air in silvery sea lights fair crested waves of pleasure join me with their treasure scores of subtle sounds on shores sandy mounds mixed moans of sweet delight all through the sultry night with lovers sweet exchange so deeply thrills did range they threaten to derange til depth of ocean breached cores satisfaction reached In wondrous waters wake love secretes new keepsake
My dear Eileen,
Your pen simply floats with the ink of romance, your lyrical phrasing gliding from one nuance to the next, keeping me on the crest of knowing nothing but feeling all.
Now, I believe I will indulge myself and revisit your unparalleled
poem, "Speak Romance."
You are a marvel; your writing just excells to incredibly new heights! How DO you do it? Karla and I would love to know your secret! LOL Very well done, brava!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Eilene you are the queen of passion in poetry. Such beautiful passion in every verse enticing us to read more and more of your work. This poem and the music are a keepsake.
Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)
Reviewed on April 20, 2007
Another extremely descriptive and well composed poem. Great job!
When Sophie Bayles inadvertently ruins a young man’s chance for employment, she sets out to find him a new position. Even though he doesn’t want her to.
When Miranda Nolan inherits a house she soon discovers a need to solve the mysteries surrounding the late owner along with resolving the strong attraction she feels for a co-claimant who lost his hearing and faces a world of silence.
Your pen simply floats with the ink of romance, your lyrical phrasing gliding from one nuance to the next, keeping me on the crest of knowing nothing but feeling all.
Now, I believe I will indulge myself and revisit your unparalleled
poem, "Speak Romance."
With loving admiration,
Richard
Love Tinka
peace,
josie
Kewl keepsake. Faultless..
Be safe,
Karen
You are a marvel; your writing just excells to incredibly new heights! How DO you do it? Karla and I would love to know your secret! LOL Very well done, brava!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.